Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinions.


Many individuals are of their opinion that position of female should be as equal as that of male in a nation's police and military power. Nonetheless, others claim that female could not be in the part of these jobs. Although both school of thought possess a degree of accuracy, I still endorse the hypothesis that woman can be involved in any occupations, especially, police and military jobs.

On the one hand, it might be that woman are not suitable for joining police force and military force due to their physical disadvantage in direct combat. To be specific, female are born with weaker physical condition than male are. Thus, when it comes to fighting with enemies in a mission, women may be easily prone to have dramatic injuries. Consequently, people suggest that lack of sufficient physical strength leads to the fact that women might not suitable for requirement of police and military jobs.

On the other hand, most of today's individuals oppose the idea because women can have a good performance in doing tasks and completing missions as men do. Specifically, while people these days are less stereotype and more open-minded with the role of male and female, there are also a variety of training schools set up and allowing women to enroll. Hence, despite these field's strenuous nature, woman are able to have an adequate police academies and military training background. As a result, the evidence support the claim of many that the role of women should not have no difference with that of men.

To conclude, despite the controversial opinion on determining the position of male in a country"s police force and military force, I still have a belief that laws can enable female to have a right in order to do anything the want to do. Also, female can perform in the counterparts' jobs in spite of their deficiency of physical strength.

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Many Certain individuals are of their opinion that position of [ 1] females should be as equal as that of have the same representation as males have in a nation's police and military. power. Nonetheless, others claim that females could not be in the part of these jobs. Although both school of thought possess a degree of accuracy, I still endorse the hypothesis that As far as I am concerned, women can be involved in any occupations, especially, including police and military jobs.

On the one hand, it might be thought that women are not suitable for joining police force and military force due to their physical disadvantage in direct combat. To be specific, For example, some argue that females, in general, are born with weaker may not have the same physical condition than strength as males. are. Thus, when it comes to active duty, fighting with enemies in a mission, women may not have the same stamina as men. be easily prone to have dramatic injuries. Consequently, people suggest that lack of For example, they may not have sufficient physical strength to remain in battle or to evacuate rapidly in an emergency. leads to the fact that women might not suitable for requirement of police and military jobs.

On the other hand, most of today's individuals people today oppose that idea because women have proven that they can have a good performance in are just as capable as men when it comes to doing most tasks in the military or police. and completing missions as men do. [ 2]

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[ 1]: When we talk about something in general, we use the plural (if it is countable).

[ 2]: The rest of that paragraph is poorly written. Clarify it and try to give examples. Revise your essay and repost it below if you wish.

anonymousin a country's police force

This would be better as just police or police forces. That's because many countries have more than just one police force so, you should use a general term.

anonymousmilitary force,

This would be better as military forces, plural. While it's understandable it's not as common as saying armed forces or military.

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anonymousThis would be better as just police or police forces. That's because many countries have more than just one police force so, you should use a general term.

No. In future, please do not mislead learners with such incorrect comments.

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On the other hand, most people today oppose that idea because women have proven that they are as capable as men when it comes to most task in the police or military. In fact, the modern world has granted both sexes a chance to accumulate the knowledge to be involved in any jobs. For example, there are a variety of police and military schools allowing both females and males to be trained and educated. As a result, with these adequate academic background and physical training, the role of women in police and military have no difference to that of men.

To conclude, despite the controversial opinion on determining the position of women in police and military force, I still have a belief that women can have a right to do anything they desire to. Also, females can perform in counterparts' jobs despite their deficiency of physical strength.

On the other hand, most people today oppose that idea because women have proven that they are as capable as men when it comes to most tasks in the police or military. In fact, the in modern world has granted society, both sexes a chance to accumulate the knowledge should have an equal opportunity to do any kind of work. be involved in any jobs. For example, there are a variety of in developed countries, police and military schools allow ing both females and males to be trained and to qualify as officers. educated. As a result, with these adequate academic background the appropriate courses and physical training, the role of women have been able to play as effective a role in the police and the military have no difference to that of as that of men.

To conclude, despite the controversial opinion on determining the position of women in police and military force, I still have a belief that women can play an equal role in a country’s police service or military as has been proven in many developed countries. have a right to do anything they desire to. Also, females can perform in counterparts' jobs despite their deficiency of physical strength.

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