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G Day Mr. Client,

I hope this email finds you
well. I just wanted to touch base with you and introduce myself my name is Hemant
Tailor, and I will be your project manager for software implementation project. I would like to schedule a kickoff call with you this week to discuss our implementation process. Let me know when is best for you to set something
up.

I look forward to hearing from you and hope you have a great day!
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Hi,

You are writing to this person as if you know him very well and as if he is your very good friend.

If he isn't, then try to revise it to be more formal in tone.

Clive
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how about this...

I would like to introduce myself to you my name is Hemant Tailor, and I will be your project manager for implementation project. I would like to schedule a project kickoff call with you sometime this week or early next to discuss our implementation process. Let me know when is best for you to set something up.

I look forward to hearing from you and hope you have a great day!
Hi,

Much better.

I would like to introduce myself to you my name is Hemant Tailor, and I will be your project manager for implementation project. I would like to schedule a project kickoff call with you sometime this week or early next to discuss our implementation process. Let me know when is best for you to set something up.

I look forward to hearing from you and hope you have a great day!

Dear Mr Smith,

I will be the manager of your implementation project. I would like to schedule a meeting with you at your office, sometime this week or early next, to introduce myself and to discuss our implementation process. Please let me know if this is convenient, and what day and time is best for you.

I can be reached at (123) 456-7890. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Hemant Taylor
Thx much for your help.....
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I hope this finds you

well. I just wanted to touch base with you and introduce myself my name is ashwani rajput

,and i will be your project manager for software implementation project . I world like to schedule a kickoff call with you this week to

HI MR Day.


I hope you're doing well.

My Name is Hemant,i am new project manager and will be handling a software implementation team today onward.

I would like to provide a brief about my education and my past work experience.

I've pursued my Btech degree from (College name) in the year of -- . I've 8 years of work exp in IT industry as PM in banking and Insurance domain. Managed and implemented cloud computing integration projects of (Client name)


I would like connect with you on call someday this week to discuss about the project in detail. Please let me know the best time to schedule a meeting with you.


You can reach me at (mobile # ). and in skype -

Have a great day.


Regards,



This is too informal. Please see my post above, for a more suitable example.

I have just pointed out some problem areas in what you have written. I haven't corrected everything, because you should rewrite it.



HI MR Day. <<< Too informal. Dear Mr Day,


I hope you're doing well. <<< Don't say this in business correspondence.

My Name is Hemant, <<< No, put your name at the end

i am new project manager and will be handling a software implementation team today onward.

I would like to provide a brief about my education and my past work experience. <<<< It's better to do this when you actually meet.

I've pursued my Btech degree from (College name) in the year of -- . I've 8 years of work exp in IT industry as PM in banking and Insurance domain. Managed and implemented cloud computing integration projects of (Client name)


I would like connect with you on call <<< you want to phone him? someday this week to discuss about the project in detail. Please let me know the best time to schedule a meeting with you. <<< You don't want to phone him?


You can reach me at (mobile # ). and in skype -

Have a great day. <<< Don't say this in business correspondence.


Regards, <<< Too informal Yours sincerely,

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