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I, Jackson Heights, authorized Jane Austen to act as my representative in Ireland during admission process for Saint Jacob College. I forwarded her the college fees in her account and she was the one who submitted the fees for two semesters as required by the college to Saint Jacob College. As I didn't apply for visa in Ireland Embassy because I met an accident so now I want to enroll in January program. As my fees are still there with you so now I again authorize Jane Austen to act as my representative. She can again use the fees to enroll me in January session.

Details of Jane Austen:
Jane Austen
D/O Shane Mann
National Card no: 988 897 744
Phone no. 343 3435 3453
Regal Street, House no. 987, Dublin, Ireland

Kind regards,

Jackson Heights
S/O Heights Longman
National Card no. 3434 34324 434
Phone no. 2432 4 24243
Prince Square, House no. 111,
London, UK
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Jackson6612 I, Jackson Heights, have authorized Jane Austen to act as my representative in Ireland during the admission process for Saint Jacob College. I forwarded her the college fees in to her account , and she was the one who submitted the fees for two semesters as required by to the college, as required. to Saint Jacob College. As I didn't I failed to apply for a visa in Ireland at the Irish Embassy because I met with an accident. so now I want Therefore I now wish to enroll in the January program. As my fees are still there with you so now on deposit with the college, I again authorize Jane Austen to act as my representative. She can again use the fees to enroll me in the January session.
- A.
Avangi
Jackson6612 I, Jackson Heights, have authorized Jane Austen to act as my representative in Ireland during admission process for Saint Jacob College. I forwarded the college fees the to her account, and she was the one who submitted the fees for two semesters to the college, as required. I failed to apply for a visa at the Irish Embassy because I met with an accident. Therefore I now wish to enroll in the January program. As my fees are still on deposit with the college, I again authorize Jane Austen to act as my representative. She can again use the fees to enroll me in the January session.
- A.

Thank you, Avangi.
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Jackson6612 I, Jackson Heights, have authorized Jane Austen to act as my representative in Ireland during admission process for Saint Jacob College. I forwarded the college fees the to her account, and she was the one who submitted the fees for two semesters to the college, as required. I failed to apply for a visa at the Irish Embassy because I met with an accident. Therefore I now wish to enroll in the January program. As my fees are still on deposit with the college, I again authorize Jane Austen to act as my representative. She can again use the fees to enroll me in the January session.

Hi. I had suggested "during the admission process," or possibly (I think in US) "during the admissions process." Not sure if you deleted the "the" intentionally. Not sure if the plural would be right for Ireland.

- A.
No, I didn't delete it intentionally. It just happened while I was reformatting the text. Thank you for the help.

Wish you good health and many years of happiness,
Jackson
Please correct the following text:

Sarah,
Thank you for enrolling me in January, 2009 session after I failed to apply for visa at Irish Embassy for September, 2008 session. I have lost the receipt of the fees which I submitted for September session. I would request you to forward me with a new receipt. If this is, in any way, inconvenient for you then please hand it over to Jane so she can forward it to me. Please make sure the receipt shows that the fees were submitted for September session and were still on deposit with the college before I enrolled for January session. The given link will take you to the scan of acceptance letter which I received some days ago.
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Hi, Jackson. I'm not finding the link. I thought maybe it would turn up. - A.
Hi Avangi,

I didn't include any link. I just wrote that sentence as part of the text.
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