hi everyone .............................. iam too happy to write in this web at a first time

I will tell you a fact that ............ I really need a big halp because my writing and spelling are too bad and I want to improve my english

can you help me ....
..I feel sad Emotion: sad and angry Emotion: angry becaue nobody want to help me to improve my English .....
Well it helps if you ask a specific question that we can give you advice on - what are we supposed to say to a general plea for help? You'll find lots of general advice here already.

And it's not very nice to become angry because no one has had time to help you yet.
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thanks alot Emotion: smile[P]

but I will have a writing exam tommore and I want to get agood mark in exam.,, A

I think if I ask help her I will be better and my writing will improve .

from this time, If you find any mastik tail my

First , we stady (discribe a graph ) and Ineed advaice to writing topic sentence and concluding sentence. can you give me example in this graphs







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the graphs are





As a general rule you could describe a graph by covering

what the graph shows (a title for it)

the dates and other data covered

the trends in the graph - does it go up/down/stable/what?

and perhaps why this is happening
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thanks nona

your comments is useful .........

and it realy help me to improve my writing .....

but can you give me an example of a topic sentenc to describe a graph shows the attendace at football matches in the UK given in thusands , between 1945 and 1995.



nonlight
Hi Nonlight,

an opening sentence describing the graph could be

The graph shows the attendance, in thousands, at football matches in the between 1945 and 1995.

A title for the graph would be:

Graph of attendance at football matches between 1945 and 1995 (1000s)

I hope that is helpful,

- Nick
thanks for averyone help me

today morning I did the exam is good ( thank for Allah )

and I think I did good in it ........... I hope to get a good mark

really this forum will give me many thing because I need to write in english to improve writig If any one find any mistake in my writino write to me
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