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Teacher gave me another chance.. I forgot to write a paragraph about science, non-science and pseudoscience about my topic which is raw food vs cooked food. I need to write how my topic difference from others. I think my topic is related to science because I wrote about the benefits... how healthy raw food are.. and what happens to it when cooked .. etc.

I really need help because if I do it correctly.. I will get 90!! instead of 65.
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So, write it and we'll check it.
Yes, but I don't know what means by that. I need examples or something. I really want that 90. ^_^
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He he. OK. I really love this forum, I actually prefer coming here than making an appointment to meet with a tutor. I know that if I write an essay and show it here, you guys would correct my grammar , etc.
So I know that I need to write in order for you guys to help me out. I am going to write the paragraph and post it here.^^

I am so stressed because I am falling back behind in English. I am trying my best to get good grades for better GPA. Anyhow, I am going to start writing later or tomorrow. I have to do some English.
We'll be waiting!
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Is it something like this? I am not done yet.

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Science, non-science, and pseudoscience

Real Scientist studies show that raw food cures diseases and protect against cancer. Another study shows that you will feel more energetic, weight lost, feel younger, and have clear skin by eating raw food which it’s a fact because it has the entire nutrient that our body needs. Fake scientist (pseudoscience) thinks that we won’t live longer by eating cooked foods. Also,
Authentic scientific studies show that raw food cures diseases and protects against cancer. Another study shows that you will feel more energetic, lose weight, feel younger, and have clear skin by eating raw food, because it has all the nutrients that our body needs. Some pseudoscientific reports, however, have suggested that we won't live longer by eating cooked foods.

I have fixed the grammar, but I don't think you have really attacked the problem.
So I am explaining how my topic relates to one of these areas and I differentiated between them?
I need to write more, so hang in there (he he) thanks a lot! I appreciate it.

PS: My topic is raw foods vs cooked food. ^^
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