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1.Selling on credit is a hot topic discussed in most of small business. Cash management is very important for a small business owner in order to keep the business alive. As experts estimate that 90 percent of small business sell on credit.

2.I have interviewed with one local grocery owner in Spartanburg area on the Asheville Hwy. name Che. She is very friendly and intelligent young entrepreneur. As she described, she walk into this business in late 1999 while only four or five grocery stores in the area which focus on Asian people. Her business grew very fast and become one big store in the area where her customers are from Spartanburg, Greenville, and other counties near her store.

3.Che used her strategy well in maintain good customers. She success in sold on credit whiles others stores find it difficult. She got all her customers address and phone numbers that easy for her to reach customer who paid late or likely to refuse to pay. She called them a week prior to the due date. She has a very good relationship with customers, especially Asian people in the area. It is important to collect cash, as business will die without cash. She will charge interest and pay late fee for customers who pay late. Techniques that she used to accelerating account receivable include having customers call her, or fax her, deposit customers checks and credit card receipts daily.
Hi Luve,

I have tried not to interfere with your style:

1.Selling on credit is a hot topic FOR most small business. Cash FLOW is very important for a small business owner in order to keep the business alive, AND experts estimate that 90 percent of small business sell on credit.

2.I interviewed CHE, A local grocery owner in THE Spartanburg area on the Asheville Hwy. She is A very friendly and intelligent young entrepreneur. As she described, she CAME TO this business in late 1999 WHEN only four or five grocery stores in the area FOCUSSED on Asian people. Her business grew very fast AND SHE HAS customers from Spartanburg, Greenville, and other counties nearBY.

3.Che HAS A strategy FOR maintainING good RELATIONS WITH HER customers. She SUCCEEDS in SELLING on credit whilST OTHER stores find it difficult. She HAS all her customers addressES and phone numbers WHICH MAKES IT easy for her to reach customerS who paY late or ARE likely to refuse to pay, AND she CALLS them a week prior to the due date. She has a very good relationship with customers, especially Asian people in the area. It is important to collect cash, as businessES will die without cash. She CHARGES interest and FEES for customers who pay late. Techniques that she useS to ACCELERATE PAYMENTS include having customers call her or fax her, AND depositING customers checks and credit card receipts daily.
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