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Life in 2020

Last Tuesday my class watched documentary film from Discovery Channel released in 2002 titled Cyberworld 2020. The story tells us about how live will be by year 2020. On that time, this world will be changing into silicon and robotic world, everything will be computerized. Computer will change people’s roles and jobs. Technology will grow so fast and you never expect this technology before. Even every aspect of our life will be touch by technology whether you like it or not.

If you look forward into 2020, your life situation will be quite similar like this time, but technology live around you even it is a small matter, such as you can predict that it will be raining soon so you have to bring an umbrella. Microchips will be placed inside your furniture and things that you have in your house for example books, tables, glasses, mirrors, photos, clothes, windows etc. All your furniture and things will know when you buy them, how many times you have been using them, and whether they are broken or not.

Long time ago this things seem impossible but thanks to Gordon Morris, who creating Morris Law. He said in 1965 that power of processing will increase twice every 18 months and until today that prediction is undeniable. Twenty years from this film released, computer will be more powerful and 100 times faster. Just for comparison, computer system for the newest branded car is much more complicated rather than computer system for Apollo 11.

By year 2020, there will be many sophisticated robots that can handle their emotion and socialize just like a human. Nowadays, scientists still in process to teach the robot how to differentiate human voice and facial expression. Otherwise people have to give the robots feedback so they know how to react, such as if we praise them, they will be happy and smile. The purpose of making this kind of robot is changing human’s difficult role.

Technology will be dominant in every aspect of our life such as security, medical, agriculture, shopping, communication, entertainment, business, etc. Your refrigerator could order your daily needs directly to the supermarket if there is something you need or empty. Your window could call your relatives or business partner in or outside your country. By 2020, robots could clean and watch over your house. You can set your favorite scenery after wake up to set up your mood and you can watch past event from your place you stand by using special glasses. Mechanic could fix your broken machine from 3D virtual image, so he does not need to go to your house with their heave mechanical tools.

For security advantages, technology will also play a big role. CCTV will be put everywhere around your neighborhoods especially in every traffic light so police will know who break the rules. It proves because many cities even countries today are putting CCTV in every traffic light. By putting CCTV everywhere in the crowded places, police can fight terrorism and crime, also search missing people. Police also could find one from hundred person who did a crime because every person have their own special number in their faces so computer can detect and recognize them easily. The more sophisticated computer we have and the smarter human will be, there is always a bad side we cannot deny for instance cybercrime, hacking, make a virus even murder. Other disadvantage we will get is lack of privacy, people easily know our personal data by access the internet, where we have been or our exact position.

Medical world will grow fast and many diseases will be cured, even with their genetic problems. We have 30.000 gen inside our body and just by using computer; parents could choose their child’s genetic, color of eyes, skin color, hair, and characteristic. Deaf because of genetic problem also could be cured by transplanting medical things in your tympanum.

Next generation’s will have totally different life, they will grown up with android and virtual teacher. In the end, whether you want or not, you have to life with technology. Technology will facilitate your job and help you to explore this world. Life with technology is a need and certainty, it is not a choice anymore.
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Hello cyndeviana-- and welcome to EnglishForward. I have underlined some problem areas:

Life in 2020

Last Tuesday my class watched documentary film from Discovery Channel released in 2002 titled Cyberworld 2020. The story tells us about how live will be by year 2020. On that time, this world will be changing into silicon and robotic world, everything will be computerized. Computer will change people’s roles and jobs. Technology will grow so fast and you never expect this technology before. Even every aspect of our life will be touch by technology whether you like it or not.

If you look forward into 2020, your life situation will be quite similar like this time, but technology live around you even it is a small matter, such as you can predict that it will be raining soon so you have to bring an umbrella. Microchips will be placed inside your furniture and things that you have in your house for example books, tables, glasses, mirrors, photos, clothes, windows etc. All your furniture and things will know when you buy them, how many times you have been using them, and whether they are broken or not.

Long time ago this things seem impossible but thanks to Gordon Morris, who creating Morris Law. He said in 1965 that power of processing will increase twice every 18 months and until today that prediction is undeniable. Twenty years from this film released, computer will be more powerful and 100 times faster. Just for comparison, computer system for the newest branded car is much more complicated rather than computer system for Apollo 11.

By year 2020, there will be many sophisticated robots that can handle their emotion and socialize just like a human. Nowadays, scientists still in process to teach the robot how to differentiate human voice and facial expression. Otherwise people have to give the robots feedback so they know how to react, such as if we praise them, they will be happy and smile. The purpose of making this kind of robot is changing human’s difficult role.

Technology will be dominant in every aspect of our life such as security, medical, agriculture, shopping, communication, entertainment, business, etc. Your refrigerator could order your daily needs directly to the supermarket if there is something you need or empty. Your window could call your relatives or business partner in or outside your country. By 2020, robots could clean and watch over your house. You can set your favorite scenery after wake up to set up your mood and you can watch past event from your place you stand by using special glasses. Mechanic could fix your broken machine from 3D virtual image, so he does not need to go to your house with their heave mechanical tools.

For security advantages, technology will also play a big role. CCTV will be put everywhere around your neighborhoods especially in every traffic light so police will know who break the rules. It proves because many cities even countries today are putting CCTV in every traffic light. By putting CCTV everywhere in the crowded places, police can fight terrorism and crime, also search missing people. Police also could find one from hundred person who did a crime because every person have their own special number in their faces so computer can detect and recognize them easily. The more sophisticated computer we have and the smarter human will be, there is always a bad side we cannot deny for instance cybercrime, hacking, make a virus even murder. Other disadvantage we will get is lack of privacy, people easily know our personal data by access the internet, where we have been or our exact position.

Medical world will grow fast and many diseases will be cured, even with their genetic problems. We have 30.000 gen inside our body and just by using computer; parents could choose their child’s genetic, color of eyes, skin color, hair, and characteristic. Deaf because of genetic problem also could be cured by transplanting medical things in your tympanum.

Next generation’s will have totally different life, they will grown up with android and virtual teacher. In the end, whether you want or not, you have to life with technology. Technology will facilitate your job and help you to explore this world. Life with technology is a need and certainty, it is not a choice anymore.
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Thank you for your kindness. I will try to fix the underline words. :-)