+1

Write about the following topic.

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

my essay:

a certain number of people have the tendency to repeat their daily activities and stay away from change while the rest accept that change is beneficial. now I will discuss both ideas but in my opinion, change is a good thing.

there are several benefits to change. for example, change makes people step out of their comfort zone and deal with new challenges. because when things change, people can not solve a problem in the same way, and therefore they have to think of new solutions to the problem. this means they can become more creative and better at what they do. another advantage to change is that it makes people's lives more interesting. because new things usually bring excitement and new experiences so people can enjoy and learn from the process of adapting to change. when people have more experience and lessons, they become wiser and live their lives with happiness.

on the other hand, many people believe that change can do harm to their lives. first and foremost, change can create many difficulties that a person might not be ready to deal with. new things can break people's routines and cause delays in their activities. this can make someone become lost and exhausted. another drawback is that change can also take away a good thing. if something or someone changes, this can means that they are not as good as they used to be.

even though there are a few disadvantages to change, I think we should focus on the bright sight. change can make us better people and make our lives full of wonderful surprises. therefore we should be ready to deal with change.

+0

Please post essays, paragraphs, dialogues and other writing in the essay forum so a moderator does not have to move your post. Click on this link:
https://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm

Next, tap on the green button "write a new post"

+0

I would fail your essay because you do not use the most basic rule of English grammar:

Every sentence begins with a capital letter. 

Not a single one of your sentences begins with a capital letter, so every one is ungrammatical.

Please revise your essay and repost it for other feedback.