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You sound OK. I don't hear weird rhythm and tones. Two things: "The" uses a soft "th" (you say "d"), and the vowel sound in the second syllable of "industry" is a schwa, as is the vowel sound in every unaccented syllable of any word.

Another question: does it sound foreign? If so how many percent?

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But why the part "young women" sounds foreign to me?

amanwithaccentsAnother question: does it sound foreign?

Yes, doubly so to an American like me because you are using British sounds.

amanwithaccentsIf so how many percent?

It is hard to be precise, maybe 30 or 40. It is obvious that English is not your first language, but I can't identify your native language.

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But why the part "young women" sounds foreign to me?

But why does the part "young women" sound foreign to me?

To my ear, "young women" sounds perfect.

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