Hi,

I´m new here and i would like to help me. I try to export my products, and i´ve found out some contacts, in a business page. I need to make the first contact with them, so i need to introduce my company and show my products.

I´ve made a letter that i would like to show you and advice if i have to change anything.

Dear xxxxx,

I would like to offer our products. We are a brazilian company, that made articles to bed, table and bath. (i don´t know if it is correctly?), sheets, towels and tablecloths. We have a complete line for the bed, consisting of percale 100% cotton or mixed sheets and pillowcase, besides eiderdowns, kits and bedspreads. We also have stamping tablecothes, consisting of 50% cotton and 50% polyester.The sizes will be according to your needs. The personalization can be done by manual stamping (??) (it isn´t machine) or embroidery.

i´m looking forward to explain you any of information that you need about our collection.

Augusto

ps. The picture of our products are in the attachments.
Hi,

I've made a few corrections but I'm not sure about the parts in pink. Eiderdowns are thick padded covers containing feathers that you use with traditional sheets and blankets and they do not have their own loose cover. I wonder if perhaps you make duvets? These are more modern and are thick padded covers (either feather or artificial stuffing) that completely replace the top sheets and blankets, and have washable loose covers. I also wonder if your 'kits' are duvet covers or bedding sets? I'm not sure what you would mean by a kit. Stamping, again I am not sure what you mean, perhaps embossing? The final sentence needs changing. If there is one photograph you need to say 'is attached, if more than one then 'photographs are'.

I would like to offer our products for your consideration.

We are a Brazilian company, that manufactures llinens for bedrooms, dining rooms and bathrooms, including sheets, towels and tablecloths. We have a complete line for the bed, consisting of percale 100% cotton or mixed sheets and pillowcases, along with eiderdowns, kits and bedspreads. We can also provide stamping tablecothes, consisting of 50% cotton and 50% polyester and we can make any size according to your needs. The personalization can be done by manual stamping or embroidery.

I´m looking forward to hearing from you and will be happy to provide any information you need about our collection.

Augusto

ps. The picture of our products are in the attachments.
Thanks for your help.

I´ve changed a little bit with your advise, but i still with some question. i´ve attached some photos about my products, because i don´t know the right word to express our tecnology. Could be serigraph??. If you could help me, i will be grateful! And what-s llinens?? is it linens?? but this is not a kind of textile? we work also with cotton, and mixed textile.

TEXT:

I would like to offer our products for your consideration.

We are a Brazilian company, that manufactures llinens for bedrooms, dining rooms and bathrooms, including sheets, towels and tablecloths. We have a complete line for the bed, consisting of percale 100% cotton or mixed sheets and pillowcases, along with duvets and bedspreads. We can also provide stamping OR serigraph or embossing tablecothes, consisting of 50% cotton and 50% polyester and we can make any size according to your needs. The personalization can be done by manual stamping or embroidery.

I´m looking forward to hearing from you and will be happy to provide any information you need about our collection.

Augusto

ps. Photographs are in the attachments.
embossing