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Many elderly are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages ?
The situation of sending the old to retirement homes is now a trend . Although there are some certain benefits, the downsides are worth considering . In this essay, both of the outcomes will be discussed Transmitting the elderly to such units may benefit greatly in terms of providing those people with specified services . Those may include : proper and timely medical cares, appropriate therapies, which cannot be done at home where professional personnels are hardly available . The reason for which this group of people really requires such intensive care is that the elderly are so vulnerable that they are always as risks of suffering from heart attack, diabetes and a variety of medical complications. For example, there are a great many care homes such as 24 plus hospital Medical Care saving countless cases of heart attack . So it is essential that the old be taken to these care units. However, this is not always the case.In fact, conveying the older ones in families to care homes and nursing centers would somehow be inhumane and offending the filial duty among children. Due to the fact that parents have risked their lives producing offsprings and dedicated their time to giving sufficient cares in terms of education, physical as well as mental health, the method of putting the aged parents to such centers is somehow a kind of betrayal an reflects their absence of filial piety. Each year, 24 plus hospital estimated that over 80% of their patients were suffering from not only underlying diseases but also depression due to the lack of their children's care.In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages in fact parallel with each other, they depend on each family’s conditions. However the negativity is actual and should be taken into consideration.
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The situation of sending the old to retirement homes is now a trend . Although there are some certain benefits, the downsides are worth considering . In this essay, both of the outcomes will be discussed Transmitting (wrong word - transmit is used for electricity and light.) the elderly to such units may benefit greatly in terms of providing those people with specified services . Those may include : proper and timely medical cares, appropriate therapies, which cannot be done at home where professional personnels (wrong form) are not hardly available . The reason for which that this group of people really requires such intensive care is that the elderly are so vulnerable that they are always as risks of suffering from heart attack, diabetes (Diabetes is not logical here. Diabetes is not an acute condition which needs sudden attention) and a variety of medical complications. For example, there are a great many care homes such as 24 plus hospital (proper names need to be capitalized.) Medical Care saving countless cases of heart attack . (Off-topic. It is about retirement homes, not retirement homes.) So it is essential that the old be taken to these care units. However, this is not always the case.In fact, conveying the older ones in families to care homes and nursing centers would somehow be inhumane and offending the filial duty among children. Due to the fact that parents have risked their lives producing offsprings (wrong word. Offspring is for animals, not people.) and dedicated their time to giving sufficient cares (wrong form) in terms of education, physical as well as mental health, the method (wrong word) decision to put of putting the aged parents to (wrong word) such centers is somehow a kind of betrayal an reflects their absence lack of filial piety. Each year, the medical staff at 24 plus hospital (Hospitals do not calculate or estimate things.) estimated that over 80% of their patients were suffering from not only underlying diseases but also depression due to the lack of their children's care.In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages are in fact parallel with each other, they depend on each family’s conditions. However the negativity is actual and should be taken into consideration. (Off-topic. The instructions did not ask you for an opinion, only an analysis.)