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Write a letter to your Municipal Corporation in about 300 words Complaining about the state of roads of your area and lack of street light here.

17- B Sadar

18-September-2017

To,

The A.k Gupta

Director- South Delhi Municipal Corporation

Delhi.

Sir,

I, Rupal Jain, resident in Laxmi Nagar. This letter is write to draw your attention to the pathetic condition of our locality. Sector 125 to Sector 137 the Stretch has been very poor Condition since last six months.This road is one of the busiest road in new Delhi.

The onset of Monsoon has only worsen the situation. There are huge Potholes on this road.Almost every other day vehicles is punctured or dented or gets stuck. Everyday citizens have to tolerate huge Traffic Jams and in the night situation is getting worse due to lack of street light.

Further, It is very difficult to pedestrian to walk along the road because vehicles like company cab buses, tend to avoid potholes and drive along the side of the roads, where pedestrian tend to walk because lack of footpath.

These conditions caused a lot of inconvenienced to the residents of this are as well as commuters.

Keeping the above in view, I hope that the SDMC will intimate expeditious steps to ensure the repairing of this road with proper lighting.

Thank you

Your faithfully

Jazzy.


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17- B Sadar ( What is this?)

18-September-2017 (Dates have no hyphens.)

To,

The A.k Gupta

Director- South Delhi Municipal Corporation

Delhi.

Sir,

I, Rupal Jain, (missing words to make a grammatical sentence.) resident in Laxmi Nagar. This letter is write (wrong form) to draw your attention to the pathetic condition of our locality. (??) Sector 125 to Sector 137 the Stretch (Is this the proper name of something?) has been very poor Condition (Not a proper noun.) since (wrong usage) last six months.This road (which one?) is one of the busiest road in new Delhi.

The onset of Monsoon (Not a proper noun; wrong usage) has only worsen (wrong form) the situation. There are huge Potholes on this road.Almost every other day vehicles is punctured (How can you puncture a vehicle?) or dented or gets stuck. Everyday citizens have to tolerate huge Traffic Jams (Not a proper noun.) and in the night (missing word) situation is getting worse due to lack of street light. (wrong form)

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Write a letter to your Municipal Corporation in about 300 words Complaining about the state of roads of your area and lack of street light here.

B-515,Royal Ensign Sector- 64, Laxmi Nagar, New Delhi.

18 September 2017

To,

Mr A.K Gupta,

Director- South Delhi Municipal Corporation,

Delhi.

Sir,

I, Rupal Jain, am a resident in Laxmi Nagar. This letter is written to draw your attention to the pathetic condition of roads in Laxmi nagar. The Stretch between Sector 125 to Sector 137 has been in a poor state since the last six months. This Stretch which is one of the busiest roads in New Delhi also lacks street lighting.

The onset of the Monsoon has only worsened the situation. There are huge potholes on this road which along with zero maintenance of this stench leads to huge traffic jams during the peak hours. Almost every other day, vehicles is punctured or dented or gets stuck. citizens have to tolerate huge traffic jams and in the night situation is getting worse due to lack of street lighting .

Further, It is very difficult to pedestrian to walk along the road because vehicles like company cab buses, tend to avoid potholes and drive along the side of the roads, where pedestrian tend to walk because lack of footpath.

These conditions caused a lot of inconvenienced to the residents of this are as well as commuters.

Keeping the above in view, I hope that the SDMC will intimate expeditious steps to ensure the repairing of this road with proper lighting.

Thank you

Your faithfully

Jazzy.

Mr (missing punctuation) A.K (missing punctuation) Gupta,

Director- South Delhi Municipal Corporation,

Delhi.

Sir,

I, Rupal Jain, am a resident in Laxmi Nagar. This letter is written to draw your attention to the pathetic condition of roads in Laxmi nagar. The Stretch (This word is not a proper noun. It should not begin with a capital letter unless it is the first word in a sentence.) between Sector 125 to Sector 137 (from A to B, between A and B) has been in a poor state since for (Do not use "since" with the present perfect tense) the last six months. This Stretch which is one of the busiest roads in New Delhi also lacks street lighting.

The onset of the Monsoon (This word is not a proper noun. It should not begin with a capital letter unless it is the first word in a sentence.) has only worsened the situation. There are huge potholes on this road which along with zero maintenance of this stench (A stench is a very bad smell, like rotten fish.) leads to huge traffic jams during the peak hours. Almost every other day, vehicles is punctured (Subject-verb agreement , also cars cannot be punctured. ) or dented or gets stuck. citizens have to tolerate huge traffic jams and in the night (missing word) situation is getting worse due to lack of street lighting .

Further, It is very difficult to (wrong word) pedestrian (wrong form) to walk along the road because vehicles like company cab buses, tend to avoid potholes and drive along the side of the roads, where pedestrian tend to walk because lack of (missing word) footpath.

These conditions caused a lot of inconvenienced (wrong form) to the residents of this are (wrong word) as well as commuters.

Keeping the above in view, I hope that the SDMC will intimate (wrong word) expeditious steps to ensure the repairing of this road with proper lighting.

Thank you (missing punctuation)

Your faithfully (missing punctuation)

Jazzy.

Mr, A.K. Gupta,

Director- South Delhi Municipal Corporation,

Delhi.

Sir,

I, Rupal Jain, am a resident in Laxmi Nagar. This letter is written to draw your attention to the pathetic condition of roads in Laxmi nagar. The stretch between Sector 125 to Sector 137 has been in a poor state for the last six months. This Stretch which is one of the busiest roads in New Delhi also lacks street lighting.

The onset of the monsoon has only worsened the situation. There are huge potholes on this road which along with zero maintenance of this stretch leads to huge traffic jams during the peak hours. Almost every other day, vehicles are punctured or dented or gets stuck. citizens have to tolerate huge traffic jams and in the night ( I am not able to understand which word is come here.) situation is getting worse due to lack of street lighting .

Further, It has become very difficult for the pedestrians to walk along the road because vehicles like company cab buses, tend to avoid potholes and drive along the side of the roads, where pedestrians tend to walk because lack of proper footpaths.

These conditions have caused a lot of inconvenience to the residents of this area as well as commuters.

Keeping the above in view, I hope that the SDMC will intimate (wrong word) expeditious steps to ensure the repairing of this road with proper lighting.

Thank you.

Your faithfully.

Jazzy.

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Mr, A.K. Gupta,

Director- South Delhi Municipal Corporation,

Delhi.

Sir,

I, Rupal Jain, am a resident in Laxmi Nagar. This letter is written to draw your attention to the pathetic condition of roads in Laxmi nagar. The stretch between Sector 125 to Sector 137 has been in a poor state forthe last six months. This Stretch which is one of the busiest roads in New Delhi also lacks street lighting.

The onset of the monsoon has only worsened the situation. There are huge potholes on this road which along with zero maintenance of this stretch leads to huge traffic jams during the peak hours. Almost every other day, vehicles are punctured or dented or gets stuck. Citizens have to tolerate huge traffic jams and in the night ( I am not able to understand which word is come here.) situation is getting worse due to lack of street lighting .

Further, It has become very difficult for the pedestrians to walk along the road because vehicles like company cab buses, tend to avoid potholes and drive along the side of the roads, where pedestrians tend to walk because lack of proper footpaths.

These conditions have caused a lot of inconvenience to the residents of this area as well as commuters.

Keeping the above in view, I hope that the SDMC will expeditious steps to ensure the repairing of this road with proper lighting.

Thank you.

Your faithfully.

Jazzy.

Mr. A.K. Gupta, (A full stop, not a comma.)

Director- South Delhi Municipal Corporation,

Delhi.

Sir,

I, Rupal Jain, am a resident in Laxmi Nagar. This letter is written to draw your attention to the pathetic condition of roads in Laxmi Nagar. (All proper nouns begin with a capital letter.) The stretch between Sector 125 and Sector 137 (from X to Y; between X and Y) has been in a poor state forthe last six months. This stretch, (stretch is NOT a proper noun) which is one of the busiest roads in New Delhi, also lacks street lighting.

The onset of the monsoon season has only worsened the situation. There are huge potholes on this road which, along with zero maintenance of this stretch, leads to huge traffic jams during the peak hours. Almost every other day, vehicles are punctured vehicles' tyres get punctured and the vehicles get stuck or dented or gets stuck. Citizens have to tolerate huge traffic jams and in the night the situation is getting worse due to lack of street lighting .

Further, it has become very difficult for the pedestrians to walk along the road because vehicles like company cab buses, tend to avoid potholes and drive along the side of the roads, where pedestrians have to walk because lack of proper footpaths.

These conditions have caused a lot of inconvenience to the residents of this area as well as commuters.

Keeping the above in view, I hope that the SDMC will take expeditious steps to ensure the repairing of this road with proper lighting.

Thank you.

Your faithfully.

Jazzy.

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