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As globalisation has made rapid strides over the years, the world has shrunk.
Trade barriers have significantly been dismantled.
The whole world has become one market.
Our debut in going global, with a foray over Thailand, prepared us for this new world order.

I'm really confused about this. Someone please help me out. Thanks.

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Is there one particular part that stumps you?

It seems to be written by someone speaking for a company that started as a local business. This company wanted to expand, and started first with a business location in Thailand. Now they are prepared to (or perhaps already have) opened locations in many different countries.
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AlpheccaStarsIs there one particular part that stumps you?
No. I just want to know which of the sentences are incorrect and why?