Task 2: Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether participation in team sports is of more benefit whereas other people tend to select personal sports is a matter of controversy. Some people claim that it is of benefit to their teamwork while others subscribe to that it may exert negative impacts on their future. My essay is going to analyze both sides of the issue and show my personal views.
In terms of psychology, taking part in team sports bestows people with gladness, inspiration when they meet a lot of people. Not only do they make new social friends, but they also could be best friends after a training session. Paradoxically, the majority of passive people or the person who want to prove their talents is prone to take part in personal sports, such as tennis or swimming. They feel at ease anxious, stressed when they are not covered by the crowd. Take me as a telling example, I am a passive person. To increase my health, I have joined in a swimming course. Although I am alone, it is my opportunity to show my talent in competition. As a result, I gain three bronze pedals. Even though it is not my expectation, it motivates me to make an effort to achieve higher results.
When it comes to awareness, team sports tend to nurture their team spirit and discipline. They will concentrate on practice seriously to contribute to building a strong squad in a teamwork environment. Not only do they improve their communication skill, but they also better their problem-solving skill, imagination and creativity. They can bear on pressure, share private stories, eat out, hang out together as a soulmate. From that, they have effort to do meaningful things in their life. Whereas the person who joins in individual sports realizes that they can solve everything themselves without depending on anyone, so they only want to enhance their health and perform themselves. Notwithstanding the lack of teamwork spirit, it improves creativity, imagination and health and help people discover their potential passion.
In summary, participation in sports is of various benefits. In my opinion, people should choose sensible sports to improve their health and skills to prepare for their future.
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Whether participation in team sports is of more benefit whereas other people tend to select personal sports is a matter of controversy. Some people claim that it is of benefit to their teamwork while others subscribe to that it may exert negative impacts on their future. My essay is going to analyze both sides of the issue and show my personal views. Here is an appropriate opening paragraph for this topic. There is no mention of a fictitious controversy or debate. I state my opinion obviously and directly. I do not tell the examiner that they have to read the conclusion to figure out what my opinion is. They know you are writing an essay. Do not tell them you are writing an essay.
People have a lot of choices when they want to play a sport. They can choose to play a team sport together with a group of their friends, or choose a solitary sport like jogging or swimming to help them get exercise and relax. Both forms can be very beneficial to one's health, and in my opinion, people should choose the sport that is most suited for them individually.
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You wrote 100 words more than the minimum (250). It is best to write a task 2 essay of 270-290 words. You will meet the minimum and not be too long-winded.
Whether participation in team sports is of more benefit whereas other people tend to select personal sports is a matter of controversy. Some people claim that it is of benefit to their teamwork while others subscribe to that it may exert negative impacts on their future. My essay is going to analyze both sides of the issue and show my personal views.
In terms of psychology, taking part in team sports bestows people with gladness, inspiration (ungrammatical noun phrase. Missing conjunction) when they meet a lot of people. Not only do they make new social friends, but they also could be best friends after a training session. Paradoxically, the majority of passive people or the person who want (wrong form) to prove their talents is prone to take part in personal sports, such as tennis or swimming. They feel at ease anxious, stressed (ungrammatical) when they are not covered by the crowd. (I do not understand what you mean.) Take me as a telling example, (comma splice error. ungrammatical) I am a passive person. To increase (wrong word) improve my health, I have joined in a swimming course. Although I am alone, (The topic of your paragraph is team sports. Your example is individual sports. That is very bad because it is inconsistent. Your examples have to support the topic of the paragraph.) it is my opportunity to show my talent in competition. As a result of my dedication to long hours of practice, I won , I gain (wrong word) three bronze pedals. (wrong word) Even though it is not my expectation, it motivates me to make an effort to achieve higher results.
When it comes to awareness, (That makes no sense.) In addition, (If you are continuing the topic of team sports, use a relevant transition phrase.) team sports tend to nurture their team spirit and discipline. They will concentrate on practicing seriously to contribute to building a strong squad in a teamwork environment. Not only do the team members they (wrong word - no antecedent )improve their communication skill, (wrong form) but they also better their problem-solving skill, (wrong word) imagination and creativity. They can bear on pressure, (wrong phrase) share private stories, eat out, hang out together as a soulmate. (ungrammatical, missing conjunction. Also, this is not very relevant to the topic.) From that, they have effort (wrong word) to do meaningful things in their life. Whereas the person who joins in individual sports realizes that they can solve everything themselves without depending on anyone, so they only want to better enhance their health and perform tasks by themselves. Notwithstanding the lack of teamwork spirit, it improves creativity, imagination and health and help (wrong form) people discover their potential passion. (This paragraph lacks coherence and there is not much cohesion. You need to focus on one paragraph topic.)
In summary, participation in sports is of various benefits. (off-topic) In my opinion, people should choose sensible sports to improve their health and skills to prepare for their future.
You have no outline for your essay. That is why it lacks cohesion and coherence. Read my advice for Task 2.
