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The chart below illustrates about the number of grievances made about noise to environment health authority in one city of Newton over the period from 1980 to 1996

Overall, as can be seen from the paragraph, there was a downward trend in the number of complaint of domestic while upward trend were observed in those of others in the period shown

In particular, starting with a significant decreases from 600 complaints in 1980 to 400 in 1984, the revenue of domestic advance declined in the next 6 years and finally hit the bottom to around 100 accusations in 1996. By contrast, that of factories, which is climb up moderately from 400 grievances in 1980 to 600 grievances in one year later, rose gradually to approximately in 1996.

By comparison, the complaints of those of others, which remained stable from 1980 to 1984. In 4 years later, road works and traffic noise, which went down approximately 100 complaints together. After that, both of this remarkable dromatic from 1980 to 1994. In the last year, there were a slow rise at nearly 50 accusations

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