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An over-packaging society results from an interplay between poor-awareness buyers and ambitious manufactures. From my own perspective, the responsibility for eliminating the mentioned society must be equally put on backs of both buyers and producers.


On the one hand, manufactures are the most effective factor that avert a growing trend of using additional covers for productssold. In order to entice a more bonanza of customers, businesses tap into a rich source of appealing packages, both for covering and containing products. Day by day, wrapping decorations, ranging from wrapping paper to single-use plastic boxes, would intrigue and educate customers that high-quality products should be meticulously wrapped in several layers of attractive covers. As a result, this inveterate buying behavior plays an inevitable role in choosing products, leading to a growing trend of using a plethora of outside packages.


On the other hand, smart customers would be also worthwhile eliminators of wrapped product overuse. The plain truth is that adjustments in selecting beloved products that are voluntarily created by goods seekers or purchasers would orientate those businesses, who are in desire of satisfying their potential customers, to reduce unnecessary packages applied on items. To be more specific, these buyers shift themselves into environmental-friendly consumers who exchange products for its real functions, not appealing appearance by wrapping. This makes businesses recognize that several layers do not bring about more handsome revenue, otherwise, decline total interests because of manufacturing cost.


As in mentioned explanations, both products purchasers and manufacturers should be aware of disadvantages of putting overpackaging products into practice in order to eschew a society of extra covers.

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Topic: Do you think consumers should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of product producers to avoid extra packaging of products? Discuss both view.

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You are using very odd and unnatural word combinations. If you just pick synonyms from a dictionary without understanding their natural context, your writing will be a disaster. I have highlighted the most egregious exemplars of this practice. The word collocations are so incongruent, that I will not make the grammatical errors. You have a good vocabulary, and some good points, so just try to write in natural, academic style.


An over-packaging society results from an interplay between poor-awareness (You use very unnatural combinations of words.) buyers and ambitious manufactures. (wrong word) From my own perspective, the responsibility for eliminating (Do you mean to kill these people?) the mentioned society (??) must be equally put on backs (Do not try to use clever idioms. They are inappropriate for an academic essay, and you did not write this one correctly.) of both buyers and producers.


On the one hand, manufactures are the most effective factor that avert a growing trend of using additional covers for productssold. In order to entice a more bonanza of customers, businesses tap into a rich source of appealing packages, both for covering and containing products. Day by day, wrapping decorations, ranging from wrapping paper to single-use plastic boxes, would intrigue and educate customers that high-quality products should be meticulously wrapped in several layers of attractive covers. As a result, this inveterate buying behavior plays an inevitable role in choosing products, leading to a growing trend of using a plethora of outside packages.


On the other hand, smart customers would be also worthwhile eliminators of wrapped product overuse. The plain truth is that adjustments in selecting beloved products that are voluntarily created by goods seekers or purchasers would orientate those businesses, who are in desire of satisfying their potential customers, to reduce unnecessary packages applied on items. To be more specific, these buyers shift themselves into environmental-friendly consumers who exchange products for its real functions, not appealing appearance by wrapping. This makes businesses recognize that several layers do not bring about more handsome revenue, otherwise, decline total interests because of manufacturing cost.


As in mentioned explanations, both products purchasers and manufacturers should be aware of disadvantages of putting overpackaging products into practice in order to eschew a society of extra covers.

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Anover-packaging society results from an interplay between poor-awareness buyers and ambitious manufactures. From my own perspective, the responsibility for eliminating the mentioned society must be equally put on backs of both buyers and producers.

On the one hand, manufactures are the most effective factor that avert a growing trend of using additional covers for productssold. In order to entice a more bonanza of customers, businesses tap into a rich source of appealing packages, both for covering and containing products. Day by day, wrapping decorations, ranging from wrapping paper to single-use plastic boxes, would intrigue and educate customers that high-quality products should be meticulously wrapped in several layers of attractive covers. As a result, this inveterate buying behavior plays an inevitable role in choosing products, leading to a growing trend of using a plethora of outside packages.

On the other hand, smart customers would be also worthwhile eliminators of wrapped product overuse. The plain truth is that adjustments in selecting beloved products that are voluntarily created by goods seekers or purchasers would orientate those businesses, who are in desire of satisfying their potential customers, to reduce unnecessary packages applied on items. To be more specific, these buyers shift themselves into environmental-friendly consumers who exchange products for its real functions, not appealing appearance by wrapping. This makes businesses recognize that several layers do not bring about more handsome revenue, otherwise, decline total interests because of manufacturing cost.

As in mentioned explanations, both products purchasers and manufacturers should be aware of disadvantages of putting overpackaging products into practice in order to eschew a society of extra covers.

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