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The line graph compares the number of visitors to two different places in the city of Grenby during a week.

It is evident that people who visit museum are higher than people who visited amusement park. Visitors went to museum from Wednesday to sunday are entirely increased, while the opposite is true for the amusement park.

Looking at the information for more detail, visitors visiting the museum on Monday are equal to the number of visitors on Wednesday, at 300 people. Whereas visitor's amusement park on Wednesday merely decreased by 50 people compared to Monday.

Tourist of the history museum on Friday is twice as a tourist to the amusement park. Likewise, with visitors at two of this places on Sunday.

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The line graph compares the number of visitors to two different places of interest in the city of Grenby during a week.

It is evident that the number of people who [ 1] visited the Grenby History [ 2] Museum are was higher than the number of those [ 3] people who visited the Grenby Amusement Park. [ 4] Moreover, the numbers of visitors who went to the museum or to the amusement park were higher between Thursday and Sunday than on other days. from Wednesday to sunday are entirely increased, while the opposite is true for the amusement park.

Looking at the information for graph in more detail, 300 visitors visiting went to the museum on Monday, the same as the are equal to the number of visitors on Wednesday. On Tuesday, the number was slightly higher, at around 340. However, that figure climbed on Thursday to 450, then to almost 600 by Friday, and then to nearly 750 by Saturday, before reaching the peak of approximately 780 visitors on Sunday. , at 300 people. Whereas visitor's amusement park on Wednesday merely decreased by 50 people compared to Monday.

[ 4] On the other hand, Tourist of visitor numbers to the history museum started at 250 on Monday, and dipped gradually to just under 200 by Thursday. After that, they increased to reach exactly 400 by Saturday, before falling slightly to end at 350 by Sunday. on Friday is twice as a tourist to the amusement park. Likewise, with visitors at two of this places on Sunday.

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[ 1]: We are talking about a particular week, so it is reasonable to use the past tense throughout.

[ 2]: We capitalize names.

[ 3]: “people” is not wrong, but it is repetitious.

[ 4]: Note the transition word/phrase.

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