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In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Traffic congestion is a major problem in various places these days. Individual car's taxes should be increased by governments to be in charge of this obstacle and the money collected from a solution can be used to develop public vehicles. There are advantages to this, but I feel that it is also a risk and could lead to some challenges.

Charging personal car owners with a high tax rate and allocate the fund for improving and developing public transportation brings a lot of benefits for society. It is undeniable that with a high tax rate, the number of car owners will gradually decrease and traffic congestion problem would slowly decline. As a result, people could commute faster work more effective and efficient and air pollution would be reduced. Moreover, the collected tax fund could be used to improve and manage public transportation, as a lot of people would change their mode of transportation from personal cars into public transportation. For example, the government could replace all the old subway trains and buses with the new ones which consume fuel efficiently and more comfortable for passengers. Consequently, the budget for public transportation fuel could be reduced and public transportation user would feel suitable in using the facilities.

On the other hand, taxing private car owners heavily have some negative sides for the individual and society.

Traffic congestion is a major problem in various places these days. Individual car's taxes (Cars don't pay taxes do they? Do cars earn money?) should be increased by governments to be in charge of this obstacle (??) and the money collected from a solution (Do solutions have a bank account?) can be used to develop public vehicles. (wrong word) There are advantages to this, but I feel that it is also a risk and could lead to some challenges.


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Traffic congestion is a major problem in amy cities. The government should take charge of this and raise money by levying a high tax on private cars. This money can be used to improve public means of transportation. There are advantages to this, but I feel that it is also a risk and could lead to some challenges.


Charging personal car owners with a high tax rate and allocate (wrong form) the fund (wrong form) for improving and developing public transportation brings a lot of benefits for society. It is undeniable that with a high tax rate, the number of car owners will gradually decrease and traffic congestion problem would slowly decline. As a result, people could commute faster (missing word) work more effective (wrong form) and efficient (wrong form) and air pollution would be reduced. Moreover, the collected tax fund could be used to improve and manage public transportation, as a lot of people would change their mode of transportation from personal cars to into public transportation. For example, the government could replace all the old subway trains and buses with the new ones which consume fuel efficiently and are more comfortable for passengers. Consequently, the budget for public transportation fuel could be reduced and the public transportation user would feel suitable (wrong word) in using the facilities.

On the other hand, taxing private car owners heavily have some negative sides for the individual and society. (Your paragraph is incomplete. Also your essay lacks a concluding paragraph.)

Could you suggest me some ideas for the disavantages of this action. I have no idea!!!
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An obvious disadvantage is that certain people (the car owners) will have to pay high taxes. It is unfair especially if these people live in places with limited access to public transportation, or if they work late at night when there is little or no public transportation. If the bus network does not have a route that directly goes from where they live to their workplace, they may have to transfer several times to get to and from work. Their commute may be much longer than going by car. Also, high taxes on private cars will be disastrous for business that are in the car business, such as car dealerships, petrol stations, used car lots, or repair shops. Fewer cars means less business for them, and that means fewer jobs in this sector of the economy.