The damage to the environment is increasing at an alarming rate due to human activities. What are some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment?

These days, our mother is weeping because of lots of major threats from the human being. And in this essay, I will demonstrate some human's activities that have a negative impact on the environment.

It can be undeniable that carbon dioxide plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in the Earth's atmosphere and the air that we breathe. It is also a waste product of fossil fuels that almost every person on the planet uses for transport and other energy requirements. Because we create CO2 every time we drive a car, cook a meal or turn on a light, or also the big amount of gas emissions from industrial zones, the proportion of CO2 in our atmosphere is rapidly increasing, which leads to plenty of environmental issues such as global warming, climate change, air pollution and so on.

Besides carbon dioxide, deforestation is one of the most factors that damage to the place where we live. As I mentioned, the amount of CO2 in the atmosphere is soaring, it means that we should plant more trees because trees can absorb CO2 and so they help to offset the fumes produced by our cars. However, humans are doing opposite things. Lots of trees and forests are knocked down and replaced by imposing buildings. People are killing themselves by acting something like this.

In conclusion, we are dealing with a number of environmental problems, but it can be resolved if an effective plan and the alternatives that could put an end to these ever growing issues in the near future.

car banana 513The damage to the environment is increasing at an alarming rate due to human activities. What are some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment?

Usually IELTS Task 2 questions will ask for your opinion, or a discussion of some sort, rather than for a purely informative essay. It is better to practice using more realistic questions.

car banana 513These days, our mother is weeping because of lots of major threats from the human being. And in this essay, I will demonstrate some human's activities that have a negative impact on the environment.

"These days" is somewhat informal.

"our mother is weeping": Task 2 requires more objective language, not metaphors. The topic is not your mother.

"lots of": informal.

"the human being": singular not suitable in this context: see graph

https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=the+human+being%2C+human+beings&year_start=1800&year_end=2000&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t1%3B%2Cthe%20human%20being%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Chuman%20beings%3B%2Cc0#t1%3B%2Cthe%20human%20being%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Chuman%20beings%3B%2Cc0

Do not start sentences with "And" in IELTS.

With a more realistic IELTS task, it is best to state your position in the introduction.

"demonstrate" is unsuitable in this context.

The phrase "in this essay" may not lose you any marks in IELTS, but equally it will not add to your score.

car banana 513It can be undeniable

Not a natural phrase: https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=It+can+be+undeniable+that%2C+It+is+undeniable+that%2C+It+cannot+be+denied+that&year_start=1800&year_end=2000&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t1%3B%2CIt%20is%20undeniable%20that%3B%2Cc0

car banana 513 carbon dioxide plays a critical role in maintaining the balance in the Earth's atmosphere and the air that we breathe.

Why are we suddenly talking about carbon dioxide? An introductory sentence is needed to link back to the topic. One way in which we are polluting the planet relates to carbon dioxide.

car banana 513the big amount of gas emission

"big" is usually considered informal

car banana 513 plenty of

"plenty of" is usually informal.

car banana 513deforestation is one of the most factors that damage to the place

.... one of the main factors that causes damage ...

car banana 513the amount of CO2 in the atmosphere is soaring, it means that

Comma-splice

car banana 513 humans are doing opposite things.

"Humans" is often used to contrast with animals or aliens.

https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=are+doing+the+opposite%2C+are+doing+opposite+things&year_start=1800&year_end=2000&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t1%3B%2Care%20doing%20the%20opposite%3B%2Cc0

car banana 513trees and forests are knocked down

.... are being knocked down OR ... have been knocked down

car banana 513but it can be resolved if an effective plan and the alternatives that could put an end to these ever growing issues in the near future

Incoherent. But it can be resolved by an effective plan and the alternatives that could put an end to these ever growing issues in the near future ???