Fossil fuels is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think is it a positive and negative development?


In contemporary society, many things in daily life are operated by energy source. While the use of alternative energy sources has not been prevalent for its drawbacks, I believe that the advantages of these sources of energy are more significant than the drawbacks.

There are several disadvantages of using other energy sources such as renewable energy and nuclear power. First, it seems hard to have such sources of energy because of geographical difficuties. Take tidal power for example. This kind of energy is just useful to the countries that have coastlines. That is to say, it is unavailable to many countries that do not have any coastlines such as Laos and Nepal. Therefore, it is impossible to install tidal power in such countries. Second, there is an utter waste of public funds to have alternative sources of energy. In many developing countries, there are still more pressing problems such as education, health care and food that need national budgets to be tackled. Thus, investing in other energy sources is likely to put a burden on the government budget and have negative effects on other sectors.

Despite aforementioned downside, I believe that the benefits of alternative energy sources are greater. For one thing, alternative sources of energy is more sustainable than finite fossil fuels. This means that such energy can be used to produce a vast amount of electricity without wasting limited natural resources such as coal, oil and gas in order to meet the needs of the public and factories. Another benefit is that these kinds of energy sources might be much cleaner than fossil fuels. The consumption of these sources of energy can significantly reduce carbon emissions that acts as a main culprit of global warming. As a result, many nations should consider alternative sources of energy as a solution to high oil and gas price, increasing demand for electricity and worries about pollution and climate change.

In conclusion, although the consumption of alternative energy sources has disadvantages, I believe that it it more likely to have positive impacts on society.

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Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?



It is true that fossil fuel is the limited source of energy. While the use of alternative energy source has several drawbacks, I believe that the advantages of alternative energy source are more significant than the negative sides.


There are several disadvantages of using other sources of energy. First, the major drawback is geographical difficulties. For example, renewable energy such as tidal power needs a huge amount of water of sea for efficient operation. This kind of energy is unavailable to many parts of the world such as Laos and Nepal that do not geographically have any coastlines. Therefore, it is useless to construct tidal power in these countries. Second, there is an utter waste of public funds to have alternative source of energy. In many developing countries, there are still more pressing problems that need to be tackled such as health care, food and education. Thus, investing in other energy sources is likely to put a burden on the government budget and have detrimental effects on other aspects.


Despite aforementioned downside, I believe that the benefits of alternative sources of energy are greater. For one thing, such alternative energy sources are sustainable. This means that it can be used to produce a vast amount of electricity without wasting finite natural resources such as oil, gas and coal, which meets a growing demand for electricity. Another benefit is that alternative sources of energy might be much cleaner than the use of fossil fuels. The consumption of alternative energy sources could significantly reduce carbon emissions that act as a main culprit of global warming. As a result, many nations consider environmentally friendly sources of energy as a solution to high oil price and worries about environmental pollution and climate change.


In conclusion, although alternative sources of energy has several negative effects, I believe that it is more likely to have positive impacts on environment.

Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?



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Thank you so much for your correction. I would be grateful if you could correct once more time and explain these errors below because I haven't found out yet.

... a huge amount of water of sea....

... Second, there is an utter waste of public funds...

Despite aforementioned downside,...

...such as oil, gas and coal, which meets...


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quynh huong 4710... a huge amount of water of sea....

"water of sea" is completely unnatural English. If water comes from the sea, it is called seawater or salt water.

"huge" is too informal for academic writing.

Also, the statement is not exactly correct.

A large supply of seawater is needed for desalination plants. 

What is required for an energy source is strong oceanic tidal forces. It is the strong currents or water flow that drives the turbines that generate electricity. Even if a country has a long coastline, there may not be places with significant tidal forces, because the tidal forces depend on the prevailing offshore ocean currents, the shape of the seabed, and the orientation of the coastline.

quynh huong 4710... Second, there is an utter waste of public funds...

Second, it would be an utter waste of public funds to develop alternative sources of energy.

quynh huong 4710Despite aforementioned downside,...

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Despite these disadvantages,

The pronouns "these" or "those" refer to the disadvantages you have just described. Either one is OK.

Words like "aforementioned" are very old-fashioned. These anachronisms are mainly used in very formal legal documents. Here are a couple of examples:

Appropriation Account A1610.1 by $3,627 by increasing line items per the aforementioned filed spreadsheet Increase Appropriation Account A1620.1 by $132,178 by increasing line items per the aforementioned filed spreadsheet ...
Be It Further Resolved that all covenants, stipulations, obligations and agreements of the City contained in this resolution and the aforementioned documents shall be deemed to be the covenants, stipulations, obligations and agreements ...

"Disadvantage" is a far superior word. "Downside" is of recent coinage and is almost never used in the plural form.

https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=downsides%2Cdisadvantages&year_start=1950&year_end=2000&corpus=15&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t1%3B%2Cdownsides%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Cdisadvantages%3B%2Cc0

quynh huong 4710...such as oil, gas and coal, which meets...

For one thing, such alternative energy sources are sustainable. This means that they can be used to produce a vast amount of electricity without wasting finite natural resources such as oil, gas and coal, which meets a growing demand for electricity.

The clause makes no sense. "Which" has no antecedent. The sentence needs to be rephrased, or split into two:

This means that they can be used to produce the amounts of electricity required to meet a growing demand without wasting finite natural resources such as oil, gas and coal.

This means that they can be used to produce large amounts of electricity without wasting finite natural resources such as oil, gas and coal. That would meet the growing demands for electricity as the country develops an industry based on information technology and the population increases.

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