1. Nowadays media reports tend to focus on problems and emergencies rather than on positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the media is likely to concentrate on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think that it bad for individuals and society but I totally disagree with these people because of following reasons:

First, showing problems and emergencies in the media instead of positive developments is a good trend because it can assist people to be more careful about what bad things which can happen to them. Since problems and emergencies showed in the media often happen in their living areas, they play a crucial role in warning them to have to be alert, which leads to their preparation for these bad situations. For instance, people can learn some essential skills such as self-protection skills, problem-solving skills and other skills in case they have to deal with these problems.

Second, the concentration on reporting problems and emergencies in the media instead of positive growth is good for people because it helps them perceive that what problems still exist so that they can find ways to solve these problems timely. If the media reports concentrate on problems and emergencies, there are more people knowing these problems, which can help them be able to be solved timely or even more quickly. The more negative stories appear in the media, the higher chance that people will become aware of it and take action towards a solution. In contrast, If these problems and emergencies are not showed in the media, people will not know about these problems’ existence. Therefore these problems will not be solved, which can result in serious consequences or even harming people’ lives.

In conclusion, the media should focus on showing problems and emergencies rather than on positive development because it helps people avoid bad things and raise people awareness of tackling problems and emergencies in life.

Nowadays the media is likely to concentrate on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think that it is bad for individuals and society, but I totally disagree with these people that because of following reasons.

First, showing problems and emergencies in the media instead of positive developments is a good trend useful and important because it can assist educate people to be more careful about what bad harmful things which can might happen to them. Since problems and emergencies showed in the media often happen in their living areas, they play a crucial role in warning them to have to be alert, which leads to their preparation for these bad situations. [ This is just repetitive] For instance, people can learn some essential skills such as self-protection skills, problem-solving skills and other skills in case they have to deal with these problems. [ This is meaningless. Give some actual examples. For instance, you could talk about fires, hurricanes and burglaries]

Your second body paragraph just continues the same theme from the first. You need to discuss another (different) point.

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In the first body paragraph, you can talk about, for example:

1- natural disasters such as floods, forest fires

2- epidemic infectious diseases

3- local issues such as traffic congestion problems

In the second body paragraph, you need to talk about something different. For example, here’s one possible topic sentence:

Moreover, it is important that the news media cover matters of national and international significance regarding politics, the economy and global security.

And some examples for the second body paragraph:

1- political corruption

2- strikes

3- international conflicts/war

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Nowadays the media is likely to concentrate on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think that it is bad for individuals and society, but I totally disagree with that because of following reasons

First, showing problems and emergencies in the media instead of positive developments is useful and important because it can educate people to be more careful about what harmful things might happen to them. Since problems and emergencies showed in the media often happen in their living areas, they play a crucial role in warning them to have to be alert, which leads to their preparation for these bad situations. For example, they can move and avoid natural disasters such as forest fires happening nearby their house if the emergency broadcast are announced timely on TV.

Secondly, it is important that the news media cover matter of national and international significance, regarding politics, the economy, and global security. Not only do those may help people catch up with what going on on the globe but also help them to take action in order to deal with these problems. For example, if the news media show political corruption people could know about the politic corruption situation in their country and so that they can assess how good management of their current government. Therefore they can consider that whether they should continue to vote for the current president in the next president election or not.

In conclusion, the media should focus on showing problems and emergencies rather than on positive development because it helps people avoid bad things and up to date national and international problems and emergencies.

Nowadays, the media is likely to concentrate on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think that it is bad for individuals and society, but I totally disagree with that because of the following reasons.

First, showing problems and emergencies in the media instead of positive developments is useful and important because it can educate people to be more careful about what harmful things might happen to them. For instance, local issues such as traffic congestion problems are typically the subjects of many radio and TV reports and programs. People appreciate such information because it helps them in their daily lives. Additionally, news reports on TV, radio or online can alert people to natural disasters such as floods, tsunamis or forest fires in their area. For example, they can warn people to move in a timely and orderly manner to safer areas. Moreover, the media can inform citizens about epidemic infectious diseases and deliver vital health advice from the health authorities to let people know what to do in those situations.

Secondly, it is important that the news media cover matters of national and international significance, regarding politics, the economy, and global security. Not only does those may that help people catch up with what is going on on around the globe, but it also helps them to take action in order to deal with these problems. For example, if the news media show expose political corruption, people could can know about the conduct of politicians corruption situation in their country and so that they can assess how good management of well their current government is performing. Therefore, they can consider that whether they should continue to vote for the current president make a better choice in the next president election. or not.

In conclusion, the media should focus on showing problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments because it this helps people stay informed about current affairs avoid bad things and up to date with national and international problems and emergencies.

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