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Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people argue that whether the film should only serve as people’s relaxed goal or they had better aid people broaden their horizons. In my opinion, I agree with the latter because of some explanation below.

On the one hand, suffering a chaotic life fosters viewers to approach telly with solely recreational purpose aiming to escape themselves from the hustle and bustle situation. Since working flat out in their companies lays much pressure on their shoulders, citizen merely have a tendency to enjoy some thrilling films with special effects and sensational actions like Fast and furious, which seems to lack of ethical factor, to set their mind at rest instead of bombarding their brain with more thorny problems involved in education. While these appealing blockbusters stimulate inhabitants’ attention, those audiences probably neglect themselves from stressful life as well as recharge their energy to initiate a new day.

Much as the feasible explanation above, still, I believe the advent of educational films eclipses the merit of films which only produce for fun as it leads residents to have well- rounded perspectives rather than immersing into action or science fiction films without meaningful content. Not only might the film which has some moral values aid citizens access huge storage of appropriate information, but it also combines with varied entertaining features to attract fans. To illustrate, Pride and prejudice – an eminent masterpiece of Jane Austen who was a glory writer – is adapted to a smash hit which satisfies millions mean audience with spectacular landscapes; and also permit viewers to have a thorough insight into British historical background. As a result, even though producers prioritize for maximizing their turnover, creating a film also afford to polish their work with informative ideas.

In conclusion, in spite of having a clear benefit of amusing films to release people’s stress, I suppose films should display some civilized values for a better society.

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Much of your writing is very unnatural. You are trying to use vocabulary words and phrases that do not fit the context, so it makes little or no sense to the reader. I have highlighted the text that has problems.

Also, you are off-topic when you talk about moral values. That is not the essay topic.


Many people argue that whether the film (This means you are talking about one film. Which one is it?) should only serve as people’s relaxed goal (wrong expression) or they had better (wrong expression) aid people broaden (wrong form) their horizons. In my opinion, I agree with the latter because of some explanation below. (Never refer to your writing in an academic essay.)

On the one hand, suffering a chaotic life fosters viewers to approach telly with solely recreational purpose aiming to escape themselves from the hustle and bustle situation. Since working flat out in their companies lays much pressure on their shoulders, citizen merely have a tendency to enjoy some thrilling films with special effects and sensational actions like Fast and furious, which seems to lack of ethical factor, to set their mind at rest instead of bombarding their brain with more thorny problems involved in education. While these appealing blockbusters stimulate inhabitants’ attention, those audiences probably neglect themselves from stressful life as well as recharge their energy to initiate a new day.

Much as the feasible explanation above, still, I believe the advent of educational films eclipses the merit of films which only produce for fun as it leads residents to have well- rounded perspectives rather than immersing into action or science fiction films without meaningful content. Not only might the film which has some moral values (off-topic) aid citizens access huge storage of appropriate information, but it also combines with varied entertaining features to attract fans. To illustrate, Pride and prejudice (wrong capitalization) – an eminent masterpiece of Jane Austen who was a glory writer – is adapted to a smash hit which satisfies millions mean audience with spectacular landscapes; and also permit viewers to have a thorough insight into British historical background. As a result, even though producers prioritize for maximizing their turnover, creating a film also afford to polish their work with informative ideas.

In conclusion, in spite of having a clear benefit of amusing films to release people’s stress, I suppose films should display some civilized values (off-topic) for a better society.

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