You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Do you agree or disagree the celebrities are paid too much money?

Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.


Nowadays people have different incomes based on their jobs. Some people believe that some jobs are not paid fairly and people who have these jobs should not earn such that amount of money. A group of people whose earning is very controversial is celebrities. I think they should be paid very much because of the difficulties they have experienced in their life.


Some people believe that each person’s earning should be directly proportional to their efforts. For example, miners should earn the most because they have the most difficult job. Another group of the population has this idea in the mind that celebrities do not add value and are not useful to society. But it should be noted that celebrities can be responsible for several valuable events like helping to charity appeals all around the world.


On the other hand, a very famous person has a special lifestyle. They can not be with their family for many days. for instance, an actor or actress may be in travelling for several months to play a role in a film. Also, they do not ensure privacy. If a celebrity has a mistake, a large number of people will know about it immediately. I am a lecturer at the university. I have some experiences with this. I can not go on a trip without any stress about whether one of my students see my family and I and if they respect my privacy or not. Sometimes they come and ask some stupid questions about my life and disturb my wife and son. Another important thing is a large number of celebrities have a very special talent or put much efforts into their jobs. It seems they earn money easily but who knows how much attempts they have to improve their skills. David Beckham, a famous football player stayed every day and continue his exercise for one extra hour after the team left the field.


In conclusion, although paying celebrities too much for their abilities or talents has some negative aspects, they are paid for difficult situations they deal with every day and also for their very special talent or much work they have to do to be a star. It does not seem to be unfair.

Nowadays people have different incomes based on their professions jobs. Some people believe that some jobs are unreasonably overpaid not paid fairly and people those who have these jobs should not earn such that amounts of money. A/One group of people whose earning is very controversial is celebrities. I think they should be paid high salaries/wages very much because of the difficulties they experience have experienced in their life.


Some people believe that each person’s earning should be directly proportional to their efforts. For example, miners should earn the most because they have the most difficult jobs. Also, they argue Another group of the population has this idea in the mind that celebrities do not add any value and are not useful to society. But it should be noted that celebrities can indeed be responsible for many several valuable events and good causes like helping to charity appeals all around the world.


On the other hand, In addition, contrary to popular belief, a very famous person celebrities usually have a special and sometimes very stressful lifestyle. To begin with, they can not be with their family for many days. For instance, an actor or actress may be away on business in travelling for several months (to play a role in a film). Also, they do not ensure have much privacy. If a celebrity makes has a mistake, a large number of people will learn know about it immediately. Having dealt with that personally, I know how irritating it can be for famous people. I am As a university lecturer, lecturer at the university. I have some experiences with this. I cannot go on a trip without having any stress about whether one of my students sees my family and I, trying to reach out to us with and if they respect my privacy or not. Sometimes they come and ask some stupid questions about too personal matters. my personal life and disturb my wife and son. Another important thing is that a large number of celebrities have specific talents a very special talent or and have put much efforts into their careers jobs. It seems they earn money easily but who knows how much attempts they have suffered to improve their skills and nurture their talents. For example, David Beckham, an outstanding famous football player, stayed/used to stay at the training camp every day for one extra hour and practiced, while the rest had already called it a day. and continue his exercise for one extra hour after the team left the field.


In conclusion, although paying celebrities too much for their abilities or talents has some negative aspects, [This opinion of yours is somehow in contrast with your thesis statement in the introduction. You should have a clear position throughout your essay.] they are paid for difficult situations they deal with every day and also for their very special talents or much the sheer volume of work they have to do to stand out be a star. It does not seem to be unfair. [In your introduction you firmly stated that they should get paid high amounts. Why do you seem tentative in your position now?]