Write an essay on the following topic.

In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.


These days, people go to shopping malls, both for shopping and entertainment. Some people believe that in the future, the main purpose of going to malls will be entertainment, not shopping. However, my view is that some shops will certainly survive in each shopping mall in the future.


Currently, many people do their shopping online. For these people, a shopping mall will not be an important place for shopping. Also, in some other people’s opinion, shopping malls are entertaining places rather than a proper place to shop. But in fact, there will be so many places in each city that people will be able to go for entertainment instead of going to shopping malls. For example, you can go to a club, gym, sports centre and cinema for that purpose.


Generally, shopping malls have some advantages for people who want to shop compared with other methods of shopping like online shopping. They let people enjoy buying goods with their family members or friends. Also, people who go to shopping malls will have the chance of choosing between different choices. People who go to shopping malls can avoid some disadvantages of other ways of buying like online shopping. For instance, they can check the size, quality, and colour of clothes which they bus and seek the advice of shop assistants. Finally, shops definitely give character to a shopping mall. In fact, a shopping mall loses its meaning and concept without shops.


I believe that there will be a place for shops in each shopping mall in the future. Although entertainment facilities will grow in number, but shopping malls are going to gather shops and entertainment under one roof.

By the way, we get a good feeling if a student thanks us for the effort that we give them for free. We are disappointed if there is no reply.



These days, people go to shopping malls, (no comma) both for shopping and entertainment. Some people believe that in the future, the main purpose of going to malls will be entertainment, not shopping. However, my view is that some shops will certainly survive in each shopping mall in the future.

Currently, many people do their shopping online. For these people, a shopping mall will not be an important place for shopping. Also, in some other people’s opinion, shopping malls are entertainment ing places rather than a proper place to shop. But in fact, there are will be so many other places in each city that people can will be able to go for entertainment instead of going to shopping malls. For example, you can go to a club, gym, sports centre and cinema for that purpose. (Those are not future facilities; they exist today in large numbers.)


Generally, shopping malls have some advantages for people who want to shop compared with other methods of shopping like online shopping. They let people enjoy buying goods with their family members or friends. Also, people who go to shopping malls will have the chance of choosing can compare between different brands, styles, and prices. choices. People who go to shopping malls can avoid some disadvantages of other ways of buying like online shopping. For instance, they can check the size, quality, and colour of clothes which they bus and seek the advice of shop assistants. Finally, shops definitely give character to a shopping mall. In fact, a shopping mall loses its meaning and concept without shops.

I believe that there will be a place for shops in each shopping mall in the future. Although entertainment facilities will grow in number, but shopping malls are going to gather shops and entertainment under one roof.

Hi, I really thank you for your valuable time and try to use your comments to improve my English.

Regards.

Students: We have free audio pronunciation exercises.
Well done👍

In general, you have written and interesting content and I had a desire to read it by the end. You just need to improve your grammar a little and everything will be perfect. But you can publish it without any hesitation. I remember how I was learning to write my first essays and how many mistakes I had! I even visited online service to get some help because I was afraid that I would have the lowest grades among students. So, just improve your skills on your own or with the help of experts. And do not forget about grammar. It is really important. You can use a lot of free tools to check your papers nowadays.

Hi, Dear stephenlkatz

Thank you very much for your kind message.

Regards

Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?