An email: Not being able to go to a party
Your friend Alex has invited you to a party this Saturday afternoon but you can’t go.
Write an email to Alex. In your email:
- apologise to Alex
- explain why you can’t go
- suggest another day when you could meet.
My work:
Dear Alex,
Thank you for inviting me to a party this Saturday afternoon, I really appreciate your invitation but I would not be able to make to the party due to my hectic schedule lately.
Recently, I have applied for a part-time tutor job in order to get experience in the working field beforehand. I have encountered many issues in setting my timetable. But all and all I do enjoy teaching a lot. One more thing, you may find it weird but the student I am coping with is a friend of mine. He is in need of tutoring and I am looking for a part-time job so we cooperate with the hope of improving ourself.
Unfortunately, I could not attend the party with you. How about we head to the beach together when the summer vacation come. What do you think ?
Please get back to me as soon as possible.I look forward to hearing from you !
Best,
Sean
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Dear Alex,
Thanks for inviting me to your party this Saturday afternoon, I would be glad to come but unfortunately I can’t ‘cause my parents are going to have a holiday in mountain this weekend.
A month ago my parents booked a trip in Italy, there are a lots of mountains, snow, beautiful weather and view and excursions. I always wanted to go hiking but never got to.
I’m so sorry but how about go to the luna park together next weekend? What do you think?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Take care,
Sean
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Dear Alex, i'm so sorry but i'm really busy in this period because of queries and tests so I can't come to the party.
I also signed up for dance so i have very little time to do anything and this is stressing me out. Don't misunderstand me I really love go to dance but I'm not used to being busy all day and this is a bad period at school because all my teachers want the first grades so I have two queries and two tests in one week, can you believe that?
I really miss you and I'd like to see you, so what about seeing each other next week? We could go dancing like we use to, i know a very nice night club.
I look forward to your response, see you soon, i hope!
your best friend,
Claudia
hi alex, i m sorry but i cant come to your party saturday afternoon. i’m sorry if i tell you this now but it happens all so quickly. i have to go with my parents at my aunt’s birth- day and i stay there the entire day cause i will go to her house and next we’ll go to a restaurant that is a little bit far from here so i sadly cant come, but we could meet another day when we both have the possibility. i can come to your party friday evening so we dont have to worry about the homework cause we dont go to
school on saturday so we stay without thoughts! i hope you’ll accept this little change, if you’re okay with this let me know
see you soon alex
by alessia