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Task 2: Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. While others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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The modern world, nowadays, has observed the contentious issue that whether organizers or consumers must take responsibility for packaging of goods reducing. While some would blame that for manufacturers, I would argue that every single people, especially customers, must pay effort to reduce to packaging products.

It is understandable why some people think that manufacturers have to decrease the packaging usages. Products which are over packaged have caused the majority harms to environment over the last decade. The plastic related to these products takes thousands years for decomposition, which will poison our planet day by day. Outside environments, such as river and earth, are also contaminated by the manufacturing process belonging to these plastic cover. There was a prime example few years ago that Thi Vai River, which is the largest river in Dong Nai, was poisoned by the riverside Vedan Factory and since that event almost no underwater creatures can live in this river till now.

In spite of some obvious evident related to manufacturers, the responsibility of consumers is also undeniable. Companies only produce what can serve human’s pursuits. It means that the more packaging of goods, the more pleasant their customers feel. It is clear that some people requires a lot of cover for their luxury electronic products for shipping and that sometimes unnecessary because of the fact that no regular layer could normal packaging method ensure the device when accident. Therefore, raising people’s awareness plays a vital role to solve this issue. If single person could reduce the amount of plastic cover demand, organizers would also moderate their packaging process.

Although there are still some problems of packaging reduction, in my opinion, every member of public should join to figure out this trouble.

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The modern world, nowadays, (repetitious) has observed (Do you mean people in the world?) the contentious issue that whether organizers (Wrong word) or consumers must take responsibility for packaging of goods reducing. (The first sentence is not good English. e.g. People agree that the excessive amount of packaging is a problem, but they disagree on who should take responsibility for solving it, the manufacturers, retailers or the buyers.) While some would blame that on for manufacturers, I would argue that every single people, (wrong form - "single" means singular) especially customers, must pay (wrong word) effort to reduce to packaging products.(wrong expression)

It is understandable why some people think that manufacturers have to decrease the packaging usages. (wrong expression - amount of packaging.) Products which are over packaged have caused the majority harms (wrong expression - most of the harm) to the environment over the last decade. The plastic related to these products takes thousands of years to decompose for decomposition, which and it will poison our planet day by day. Outside environments, such as Rivers and earth, land are also contaminated by the manufacturing process belonging to these plastic cover. (Plastic does not own manufacturing processes. The manufacturers of these wrapping materials, especially plastic, also damage .... ) There was a prime example a few years ago. The that Thi Vai River, which is the largest river in Dong Nai, was poisoned by the riverside the Vedan Factory and since that event almost nothing could no underwater creatures can live in this river till now.

In spite of some obvious evident (wrong word) related to manufacturers, the responsibility of consumers is also undeniable. Companies only produce what can serve human’s (wrong word) pursuits. It means that the more packaging of goods, the more pleasant their customers feel. It is clear that some people requires (wrong form) a lot of cover (wrong word) for their luxury electronic products for shipping and that sometimes unnecessary because of the fact that no regular layer could normal packaging method ensure the device when accident. (Ungrammatical. I don't understand this.) Therefore, raising people’s awareness plays a vital role in solving this problem. to solve this issue. If every single person could reduce the amount of plastic cover demand, (??) organizers (wrong word) would also moderate (wrong word) their packaging process.

Although there are still some problems of packaging reduction, in my opinion, every member of public should join to figure out this trouble.

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How can I express the idea that: customers require a lot of covering (such as, box, anti-sock layer,...) while it is useless in case of severe accident (like dropping)

For electronics, customers prefer carefully-packaged products in hard plastic cases within a box, which may be in a larger box set in foam, bubble wrap or packing peanuts or swaddled in many layers of plastic wrapping or cardboard. Foam, peanuts and bubble wrap give a layer of protection against damage in transport.

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