EXPLAIN SOME OF THE WAYS IN WHICH HUMANS ARE DAMAGING THE ENVIRONMENT. WHAT CAN GOVERNMENTS DO TO ADDRESS THESE PROBLEMS? WHAT CAN INDIVIDUAL PEOPLE DO?


Nowadays, humans take responsibility for plenty of environmental problems. Thus the government in general and individual people, in particular, must take immediate actions to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet.

On the one hand, there are numerous issues facing humans today. First of all, the biggest threat to the environment is air pollution. Gas emissions come from industrial zones and exhaust fumes from motor vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating impact on the earth. Moreover, the cutting down of forests for wood, paper, and farming also contributes to the temperature rise. Those are the current alarming rate for human’s lives.

On the other hand, the government should make more efforts to find worthy solutions to reduce the effect on the planet. They could raise the awareness of people in the community to use public transport in lieu of private vehicles. Word has it that, the local authorities should implement laws to limit emissions from factories or to force factories to use renewable energy from solar, wind, and water power.

Last but not least, individuals are also responsible for the impact they have on the environment.

We should cut down on the energy use: use led night bulbs and unplug unused electronic devices. Besides, we are able to choose products with less packing and recycle as much as possible. According to lots of surveys, most supermarkets and convenience stores now provide reusable bags for shoppers. Likewise, more and more people are having a sense of bringing their own tote bags, which can reduce plastic waste dumped into the environment. By reusing and recycling, we can help the environment become better and better.

By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that both national governments and individual people must play their part in looking after the environment.


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EXPLAIN SOME OF THE WAYS IN WHICH HUMANS ARE DAMAGING THE ENVIRONMENT. WHAT CAN GOVERNMENTS DO TO ADDRESS THESE PROBLEMS? WHAT CAN INDIVIDUAL PEOPLE DO?


Nowadays, humans take responsibility for plenty of environmental problems. Thus the government in general and individual people, in particular, must take immediate actions to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet.

On the one hand, there are numerous issues facing humans today. First of all, the biggest threat to the environment is air pollution. Gas emissions come from industrial zones and exhaust fumes from motor vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating impact on the earth. Moreover, the cutting down of forests for wood, paper, and farming also contributes to the temperature rise. Those are the current alarming rate for human’s lives.

On the other hand, the government should make more efforts to find worthy solutions to reduce the effect on the planet. They could raise the awareness of people in the community to use public transport in lieu of private vehicles. Word has it that, the local authorities should implement laws to limit emissions from factories or to force factories to use renewable energy from solar, wind, and water power.

Last but not least, individuals are also responsible for the impact they have on the environment. We should cut down on the energy use: use led night bulbs and unplug unused electronic devices. Besides, we are able to choose products with less packing and recycle as much as possible. According to lots of surveys, most supermarkets and convenience stores now provide reusable bags for shoppers. Likewise, more and more people are having a sense of bringing their own tote bags, which can reduce plastic waste dumped into the environment. By reusing and recycling, we can help the environment become better and better.

By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that both national governments and individual people must play their part in looking after the environment.


please help me to check my essay: my mistakes, structures... and so on.

thanks a lot.

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Nowadays, humans take responsibility for (This does not have the meaning you intend. It means that people are concerned about the environment and do things to help it get better.) plenty of ("Plenty of" is a casual expression. Do not use it in formal writing.) environmental problems. Thus the government in general and individual people, in particular, must take immediate actions to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. (This paragraph is not focused on the topic. There are three prompts that you need to answer:

1. In what ways are people damaging the environment?

2. What can governments do about it?

3. What can individuals do about it?

You did not answer any of these questions directly. Your answered these questions, which are similar, but not the same. Read the prompts very carefully and address them precisely.

1. Do humans cause environmental problems?
2. What is the solution?


On the one hand, there are numerous issues (Yes, the pandemic, poverty, war, and overpopulation. You see that you are not focused on the topic.) facing humans today. First of all, the biggest (Big and huge are juvenile words. Avoid them in academic writing.) most significant threat to the environment is air pollution. Gas emissions come from industrial zones and exhaust fumes from motor vehicles lead (Your sentence is not grammatical. There are two verbs and only one subject.) to global warming, which may have a devastating impact on the earth. Moreover, the cutting down of forests for wood, paper, and farming also contributes to the temperature rise. Those are the current alarming rate (Subject-verb mismatch. Also "rate" is the wrong word.) for human’s lives.

On the other hand, (You have misused this transition phrase. It is for opposite ideas. e.g. On the one hand, living at home while attending university is the best choice for a student. .... On the other hand, living away from home is a flat with roommates is the best choice...) the government should make more efforts to find worthy solutions to reduce the effect (Of what?) on the planet. They could raise the awareness of people in the community to use public transport in lieu of private vehicles. Word has it that, (Not an appropriate expression.) the local authorities should implement laws to limit emissions from factories or to force factories to use renewable energy from solar, wind, and water power.

Last but not least, (Misuse of transition. This phrase is in the sequence: First, Second, Third, Last...) individuals are also responsible for the impact they have on the environment. We should cut down on the our energy use: use led (This should be LED. "led" is a verb.) night (wrong word) bulbs and unplug unused electronic devices. Besides, we are able to must choose products with less packing and recycle as much as possible. According to lots of ("Lots of" is a casual expression. Do not use it in formal writing.) surveys, most supermarkets and convenience stores do not now provide reusable bags for shoppers and we should patronize the ones that do.. (You need to express a change.) Likewise, more and more people are having a sense of bringing their own tote bags, which can reduce plastic waste dumped into the landfills. environment. By reusing and recycling, we can help the environment become better and better.

By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that both national governments and individual people must play their part in looking after the environment. (You did not adequately answer the topic prompts. You must address all of them and summarize your points in the conclusion. If you pay close attention to the instructions, you will get a good score because you do not make very many errors of grammar.)