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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

Why is this the case?

What can be done about this problem?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Albeit the development in the agricultural sector, a lot of people worldwide still suffer from hunger. The underlying factors and some remedies to counteract this issue will be mentioned in my writing.

One of the origins of this concern is due to climate change when extreme weather conditions such as prolonged droughts and severe storms substantially affect harvest in agriculture. This tends to make production deteriorate then might bring about the shortage of food provided to people. In addition, a further serious root owning to the impact of wars or conflicts on agriculture. These violent chaoses should perhaps practically dilute the crops, prevent farmers from producing and delivering their agricultural produce to people around the globe. This range of causes inevitably happens in developing countries such as Viet Nam and leads to long-term consequences.

The way to curb this crisis should be to build early natural disaster prediction systems to punctually warn people about the forthcoming disaster events. This tends to help farmers anticipate and apply some methods with the use of techniques and practical experiences to save the crops. Another remedy is that governments and authorities would regulate the laws to penalize people for triggering turbulence. Besides, officials may well lessen the challenge of food shortage by providing social welfare to people who endure the famine as the effects of lack of food.

In conclusion, global people still put up with the lack of food provided might due to the impact of climate change and social riots. And methods to address these problems are to prepare for severe weather and support farmers by the power of authorities.

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Albeit the (Wrong usage) development in the agricultural sector, a lot of people worldwide still suffer from hunger. The underlying factors and some remedies to counteract this issue will be mentioned in my writing.

Do not mention your writing. Do not mention your essay. The examiner knows that you will write about the reasons and remedies of this issue - those are the instructions. Do not repeat the instructions. Answer the essay prompts with your thesis statement. For example:

The primary cause is disruption in food production due to natural disasters, and the government can take action to secure an adequate food supply.


One of the origins of this concern (Wrong usage) is due to climate change when extreme weather conditions such as prolonged droughts and severe storms substantially affect the harvests. in agriculture. This tends to make production deteriorate (Wrong usage) less than normal which results in a then might bring about the shortage of food provided to people. In addition, a further serious root (Wrong word) owning to the impact of wars or conflicts on agriculture. These violent chaoses (Wrong word, wrong form, wrong spelling ) should perhaps practically dilute (Wrong word, - dilute is for liquids.) the crops, (missing conjunction, ungrammatical sentence structure, ) prevent farmers from producing and delivering their agricultural produce to people around the globe. This range of causes inevitably happens in developing countries such as Viet Nam and leads to long-term consequences. (This is not focused on the topic. Do not stray off the topic. You can add an example from personal experience. Do people you know go hungry?)


The way to curb this crisis should be to build early natural disaster prediction systems to punctually (Wrong word,) warn people about a the forthcoming disaster events. This tends to help farmers anticipate and apply some methods with the use of techniques (What techniques and methods are you talking about? Be specific.) and practical experiences to save the crops. Another remedy is that governments and authorities would regulate the laws to penalize people for triggering turbulence. (Wrong words - this makes no sense. Turbulence is wind gusts or big waves. How can people cause the wind to blow? Can the government pass a law to prohibit the wind from blowing?) Besides, officials may well lessen the challenge of food shortage by providing social welfare to hungry people who endure the famine as the effects of lack of food.

In conclusion, global people (Wrong phrase - there are poor people, rich people and fat people, but there is no such thing as global people.,) still put up with the lack of food provided might be due to the impact of climate change and social unrest riots. (Wrong word,) And methods to address these problems are to prepare for severe weather and support farmers by the power of authorities.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

Why is this the case?

What can be done about this problem?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


Albeit the development in the agricultural sector, a lot of people worldwide still suffer from hunger. The underlying factors and some remedies to counteract this issue will be mentioned in my writing.

One of the origins of this concern is due to climate change when extreme weather conditions such as prolonged droughts and severe storms substantially affect harvest in agriculture. This tends to make production deteriorate then might bring about the shortage of food provided to people. In addition, a further serious root owning to the impact of wars or conflicts on agriculture. These violent chaoses should perhaps practically dilute the crops, prevent farmers from producing and delivering their agricultural produce to people around the globe. This range of causes inevitably happens in developing countries such as Viet Nam and leads to long-term consequences.

The way to curb this crisis should be to build early natural disaster prediction systems to punctually warn people about the forthcoming disaster events. This tends to help farmers anticipate and apply some methods with the use of techniques and practical experiences to save the crops. Another remedy is that governments and authorities would regulate the laws to penalize people for triggering turbulence. Besides, officials may well lessen the challenge of food shortage by providing social welfare to people who endure the famine as the effects of lack of food.

In conclusion, global people still put up with the lack of food provided might due to the impact of climate change and social riots. And methods to address these problems are to prepare for severe weather and support farmers by the power of authorities.

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