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Nowadays, many animal species are being extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.


People hold conflicting views about whether money should be spent on protecting endangered animals or on improving human living standard. In my opinion, I believe that human beings are more crucial.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why government should prevent animals from being extinct. Firstly, the loss of animals can lead to a significant decrease in econimic growth. As animals die out, the preservation sites are pulled down, tourists can no longer come to visit. Take Saola Preservation Site in Viet Nam as an example. As soon as the disappearance of this animal in 2005, the local community lost 23% tourists and 1.52 billon VND gaining from tourism sector. Secondly, the demise of animals can upset the balance of nature, change the ecosystem completely, and may cause other creatures to suffer. As the result, biodiversity is being destroyed.

On the other hand, I believe that local and national authorities should allocate money on improving human life, rather than that of animals. Nowadays, poverty and illiteracy are enormous problems affacting largely on people on international scale. Such fields as education, health and social services should be drawn attention to by the government. Another reason is that, I believe human being is the direct factor that contribute to the development of economy. Once those has been well-educated and well-trained, they can devote their abilities and efforts to make their nation prosperous.

For the reasons mentioned above, I am of the opinion that human development is worth being invested on since they play more integral part in a country growth.

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People hold conflicting views about whether resources money (The task does not mention money...) should be spent on protecting endangered animals or on improving our lives. human living standard. In my opinion, ("Believe" is an opinion, so this phrase is redundant.) I believe that people human beings are more crucial.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why the government should prevent animals from being going extinct. Firstly, First, the loss of animals can lead to a significant decrease in econimic growth. As animals die out, the preservation sites are used for housing and industry, are pulled down, (wrong verb, missing conjunction) tourists can will no longer come to visit. Take Saola Preservation Site in Viet Nam as an example. As soon as the disappearance of this animal disappeared in 2005, the local community lost 23% of its tourists and 1.52 billon VND gaining from tourism sector. Secondly, Second, the demise of animals can upset the balance of nature, change the ecosystem completely, and may cause other creatures to suffer. As the result, biodiversity is being destroyed.

On the other hand, I believe that local and national authorities should allocate money to on improving human life, rather than that of animals. Nowadays, poverty and illiteracy are enormous problems affacting largely on people on international scale. (Unnatural) Such fields as education, health and social services should be drawn attention to need more investment by the government. Another reason is that, I believe (Do not include your opinion in a body paragraph. Opinions go in the introduction. Body paragraphs have arguments supporting your opinion.) human being is the direct factor that Moreover, it is people who contribute to the improvement of the country's development of economy. Once those (wrong pronoun) has (wrong verb form) been well-educated and well-trained, they can devote their abilities and efforts to make their nation prosperous.

For these reasons mentioned above, I am of the opinion that human development is more worthy of investment than animal preserves, is worth being invested on since they play more integral part in a country's growth.

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papayah123Nowadays, many animal species are being extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It should be "going" or "becoming."

Here are better versions of this task:

1. Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on problems human beings. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
2.  Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
3. Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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