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Environmental damage is always a head-aching problem with all the nations in the world. It is considered by some that the governments should tackle the environmental loss. Meanwhile, others think that it should be an individual responsibility. From my point of view, both the governments and individuals have to grapple this issue.

On the one hand, there are many people who believe that governments should take charge of decreasing global environmental damage. It is true that the governments could exert huge impacts on environmental problems. Firstly, they could enforce law or tax to protect the nature. For instance, they could force companies to use renewable energies, such as wind power or solar power instead of fuel energy or the companies who release sewage non-treated directly to lakes or the ocean should be seriously punished. These activities might restrict the exhaustion of the earth’s natural resources and protect the environment from being polluted. Secondly, the governments could negotiate other countries about an environmental convention that defines particular regulations about the protection of the environment. Therefore, national efforts might be ensured in reducing environmental damages worldwide.

On the other hand, it is thought by some that environmental loss should be tackled by individuals. In fact, the awareness of inhabitants play key roles in reducing environmental problems. Everyone could save the planet by very simple activities, such as minimizing fuel and electricity. For example, turning off all unnecessary electrical equipments helps to save more energy and curb the massive exploitation of nonrenewable power. Moreover, people could move by public transports instead of driving their own car to minimize the amount of gas emission released by vehicles which is the main reason for air pollution. Every good activity will have positive influences on nature and together, we can limit environmental damage.

In conclusion, as individuals, we could contribute by step to reduce environmental damage. However, the government’s efforts would be better to exert global influences on the environment.



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Environmental damage is always a head-aching problem with [ 1] Nowadays, there are various environmental challenges facing all the nations in the world. [ 2] Those include global warming, pollution and depletion of natural resources. It is considered by some that the governments should tackle the this environmental damage, loss. Meanwhile, whereas others think that it should be an individual responsibility. From my point of view, both the governments and individuals have to do their share. grapple this issue.

On the one hand, there are many people who believe various measures that governments [ 3] can should take charge of decreasing to reduce global environmental damage. [ 4] It is true that the governments could exert huge impacts on environmental problems. Firstly, they could enforce [ 5] laws or levy taxes [ 5] to protect the conserve nature and protect the environment. For instance, they could force encourage and reward companies to use renewable energies, energy such as wind power or solar power instead of fossil fuel energy. or the In addition, companies [ 6] who which release sewage non-treated directly pollutants to the environment lakes or the ocean should [ 3] can be strongly penalized. seriously punished. These initiatives activities might restrict can slow down, and potentially halt, the exhaustion depletion of the earth’s natural resources and protect the environment from being polluted. Secondly, the governments could negotiate with other countries about an and commit to a global environmental convention that defines particular regulations about the protection of the environment. Therefore, national efforts might be ensured in reducing environmental damages worldwide.[ 4]

On the other hand, it is thought by some that environmental loss should be tackled by individuals also have an important role to play in protecting the environment. In fact, the awareness of inhabitants people plays a key role in reducing mitigating environmental problems. Everyone could help save the planet by very simple actions, activities, such as minimizing fuel and electricity consumption. For example, turning off all unnecessary electrical equipments equipment helps to save more energy and curb reduce the massive exploitation of nonrenewable fuels. power. Moreover, people could move by rely more on public [ 7] transport instead of driving their own car to minimize the amount of gas emissions released by vehicles, which is the main reason for air pollution. Every good activity little action will have a positive influences impact on nature and together, we can they all add up to limit environmental damage.

[ 8] In conclusion, to tackle environmental damage, governments can legislate to penalize polluters and reward green businesses, but individuals can also contribute by increasing their environmental awareness and reducing their use of nonrenewable resources. as individuals, we could contribute by step to reduce environmental damage. However, the government’s efforts would be better to exert global influences on the environment.

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[ 1]: “headaching” is not a word. At the start of the introduction, you need a clear sentence to tell the reader what the topic is.

[ 2]: Then you write one or two sentences to provide some background.

[ 3]: Do not preach in an essay.

[ 4]: Avoid meaningless repetition.

[ 5]: When we talk about something in general, we use the plural (if it’s countable).

[ 6]: We use “who” for people.

[ 7]: As a noun, transport” is uncountable. The spell checker did not complain about “transports” because it thinks you mean the third person singular verb. For example: This pipeline transports oil to the port.

[ 8]: Do not write a generic (meaningless) conclusion. You will get better marks if you can summarize the main points/findings from the body paragraphs.

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Hello Natasia, and welcome to the forum.

What was the exact question for the above essay?

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Reducing global environment damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. To whats extent do you agree or disagree?

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Thank you very much for your comments for my essay. It helps me a lot to improve my writing skills.

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