Ielts Writing Part 1

The bar chart compares the expenditures, in pounds sterling, among the four nations, namely named (wrong word) Italy, Germany,France,Britain (Put a space after the commas.) on consumer goods. (You did not mention categories, so the reader thinks there is one total for each country. Poor reporting) Units are measured in pound (wrong form) sterling.

Overall, the British spent the highest amount of money on all types of goods, (You did not mention any categories or types.) while Germany had the least expenditure for those products.

The British spent the highest amount of money on photographic film , whereas Germany spent the least money which was only a little bit above 140000. In terms of tennis racquets,France (Put a space after the commas.) had the least spending with also a few slightly more than 140000, in contrast, Britain still took the first position as they spent the most, almost 160 000 on this product.

Furthermore, (not a natural transition word.) Italy had tied with France for the most expenditure on buying toys,which (Put a space after the commas.) was the same as with France. On the other hand, their least spending was personal stereos,which (Put a space after the commas.) was a little bit lower than the highest amount figure (wrong word) that belonged to which was for Britain. Meanwhile, (not a natural transition word.) CDs and toys are the third and fourth most purchased by the 4 these nations.

Please post the complete instructions. We appreciate a figure that is easier to read.

Topic:

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.

If you would like a sample essay, you may ask for one. This bar chart is far more complicated than the usual Task 1 figures.

Hi AlpheccaStars!

I'm a leaner so may you give me and the writer a sample for this chart. Please!

This task is unusually complex for Task 1. It is difficult to analyze the information adequately to write a good report "for a university lecturer" in 20 minutes. There are 24 different combinations of country and category!

However, what you do is to focus only on the part of the bars that have the data. Also add some intermediate grid lines. That really helps to quickly see the values. And already this bar chart is offset from the 0 value line; they should have started at a higher value.

Here is what I am talking about. See how this makes the chart easier to analyze? Then get your calculator and start adding up the totals for the four countries. You can visually compare averages of the 4 values for each type.

The horizontal bar chart compares the amounts of money (in pounds sterling) spent in each of four countries, Germany, Italy, France and Britain on each of six types of inexpensive consumer items. The items range from personal stereos and CDs, to Toys and Tennis racquets.

Overall, Britain's total outlay was the most among these countries; it was highest in every category. Photographic film had the highest average across all countries, and personal stereos had the lowest.

In detail, the range of values was not large, £145 to £172 thousand as was exemplified by the Photographic film category. Toys also had quite a spread, from Britain at £168 thousand to Germany, £148 thousand. In contrast, Personal stereos had the narrowest spread, £147 to £153 thousand. In total, the British expenditures were £988,000, followed by France and Italy which were nearly the same, and then Germany, about a hundred thousand less than Britain. France was the second-highest spender on Photographic film, CDs and Toys (tied) and Italy was in that position for Tennis racquets, Perfume, Stereos and Toys (tied).