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The line graphs show the number of money British parents spent on their children's sporting activities and the number of children in Britain who engaged in three types of sports from 2008 to 2014.
It is transparent that parents spent more money each year on their children participated in sports over the six years. In 2008, the amount of money spending was $20 per month on children's sports and increased steadily over the following six years. By 2014, the average monthly amount has risen relatively over $30.
Looking at the other graph, in 2008 there had approximately 8 million. British children played football, whereas only 2 million children practiced Athletics.
Football participation stayed fairly unchanged throughout six years between 2008 and 2010. However, participation in swimming almost doubled, about 4 million children, and there was a near fivefold increase in the number of children doing athletics.

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Ngọc Diễm 831 the number of money

Incorrect. Money is non-count.

Ngọc Diễm 831three types of sports

What are these types?

Ngọc Diễm 831It is transparent that

Delete. Dummy-it clauses give no information.

Ngọc Diễm 831on their children participated in sports

Ungrammatical. You cannot use a full clause as the object of a preposition.

Ngọc Diễm 831amount of money spending

Incorrect verb form.

Ngọc Diễm 831Looking at the other graph

Delete.

Ngọc Diễm 831 there had approximately 8 million. British children played football,

Ungrammatical.