The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent on six different consumables of four European nations.
In general, Britain had the greatest proportion of consumer expenses of all categories while Germany stood out as the country that spent the least expenditure on almost all types of consumables. Besides, it is easy to notice that Germans and Italians, on the whole, spent less money compared to France and Britain.
Germany and Italy spent less money on consumer goods in most categories compared to the remaining nations, around £150,000 each, with the exception of tennis racquets and perfume where the amounts of money spent on these categories by the aforementioned countries were greater than the French.
On the other hand, Britain held the biggest slice of the cake in every category, predominating other nations in terms of expense. In addition, Britain especially spent the most on photographic film, approximately £170,000.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent on six different consumables consumer items of in four European nations.
In general, Britain had the greatest proportion of consumer [ 1] expenses of spending in all categories, while Germany stood out as the country that spent the least amount expenditure on almost all of the items shown. types of consumables. [ 2] Besides, it is easy to notice that Germans and Italians, on the whole, spent less money compared to France and Britain.
[ 3] Germany and Italy spent less money on consumer goods in most categories compared to the remaining nations,
[ 4]
Spending in Germany was in a tight range of about £130,000 to £150,000 in those categories, with CDs and photographic items accounting for the least and tennis racquets for the most.
In Italy, roughly £155,000 was spent on tennis racquets, CDs and perfume each, slightly less on personal stereos, but almost £160,000 on photographic goods and on toys each.
The French spent about £130,000 on tennis racquets and approximately £165,000 on photographic supplies. The other items were in between.
Finally, in Britain, expenditure was £155,000 on personal stereos and the same on tennis racquets, followed by spending on perfume, CDs, toys, and then photographic items which accounted for around £170,000.
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[ 1]: “expense” is not a synonym for “spending” or “expenditure”.
[ 2]: That is repetitive and clumsy.
[ 3]: Again, that is repetitive, which is terrible in a summary task!
[ 4]: The key to a successful summary is a good structure. Here, you have six consumer items, and four countries. Therefore, you can write paragraphs on consumer items, or you can write paragraphs comparing countries. Obviously, it is easier to write four small paragraphs about each of those countries. See above.