The charts give information about the purposes of adults when they make decisions to study. Additionally, the pie chart illustrates how people want the fee of adult education to be shared.
Firstly, a noticeable aspect is that most adults decide to study due to their interest in subjects. Particularly, forty percent of people who is in the survey choose that reason. Then it was followed by the 38% of adults wanting to join the course in order to gain qualifications. The others that decide to study have many goals to achieve, such as improving prospects of promotion, doing the job in an effective way, being able to change jobs and meeting people, or just merely because of their enjoyment. Surprisingly, the survey shows that only 9% of adults studying to meet people.
On the pie chart, the data shows that most people think the costs should be shared to individual, which reaches the highest point of 40 percent. In contrast, the percentage of whom want to leave the costs for tax is 25%, which is the lowest one.
Overall, in the opinions of most adults, they prefer to study results from their interest. In addition, they think that the costs of each course should be shared to individual.
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Please read my advice for Task 1 essays. You make many common mistakes.
Nguyễn Trúc Song ThưThe charts
There are bar charts, eye charts, flow charts, organization charts, Gantt charts and pie charts. What kind of chart are you writing about? How many are there?
Nguyễn Trúc Song Thư give information about
That is vague. Information can be almost anything. Be precise.
Nguyễn Trúc Song Thưthe purposes of adults
That does not make sense.
Nguyễn Trúc Song Thư the pie chart illustrates how people want the fee of adult education
Illustrate is not a good verb for a pie chart. Read my advice.
"Fee" is not a very good word. Usually there are several fees associated with a class. "Cost" is much better.
Hello, thank you so much for helping me. May I add the charts that I wrote about, please?
I will be grateful if you correct my essay again.
Also, do you mind if I ask you a question, please? I want to ask if there is any word that can be replaced the word "costs"? I have no idea.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Thank you!
Yes!
Add the charts as a file with an image. Click on "add a comment" or "answer" and put the file in your message.
Why do you want to replace the word "costs". Is it in the instructions or as a label in the charts?
Usually it is not a good idea to explore the use of synonyms in Task 1. Save that skill for Task 2.
Synonyms seldom have precisely the same meaning.
One objective of Task 1 is to demonstrate you ability to be accurate and precise in a mathematics and science context.
Hello, I just added a photo of the charts. I hope you will correct my essay again. Thank you so much!
Can you read the writing on this photo? I can't.
It is out of focus. We have to be able to read it!
Read my advice about paragraphing in Task 1:
Paragraph 1: Describe the figure or infographic. Give the reader an idea of the categories and time frame. Do not mention any data values.
Paragraph 2: "Overall". Pick out the main features, 2 or 3.
Paragraph 3: "Detail" Provide some of the important details. Focus on comparisons.
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Thank you so much for your advice! I will learn from it and write this essay again.