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Hi. Could you please check my IELTS Writing task 1. I'm newbie to IELTS, so maybe there are so many errors.

If can, please give me the estimated band of IELTS. Thanks a lot.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The line graph indicates the figures for foreigners visiting the coast, the mountains and the lakes in a European country throughout a period of 20 years.

Overall, the figures for visitors who came to the lakes and coast increased dramatically. Likewise, the figure of mountains visitors climbed slightly.

In 1987, the coast is the most popular choice of visitors when came to a European country with around 40 thousand people while the number of visitors who came to the mountains and lake was about 20 thousand and 10 thousand respectively. Five years later, the lakes’ visitors overtook the mountains’ visitors by around 25 thousand people. By contrast, the year 1992 saw a slight fall in the figure of visitors who come to the coast from 40 thousand to about 35 thousand.

From 1992 to 2002, the number of lake visitors rose enormously and reached a peak of 75 thousand in 2002 and declined gradually in the last 5 years. Also, the figures for the coast and mountains’ visitors climbed to about 75 thousand and nearly 35 thousand visitors respectively.



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