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The chart gives information about the main purposes for using phones of teenagers in one African country in over a period of 4 years, starting from 2016.

Overall, it can be seen that teenagers mainly using their phones for social networks, and followed by Email and Digital camera. However, the purpose for Phone calls witnessed a downward tendency.

Obviously, Social network occupied 50% of the reason for using phones, which is two times as many as the figure of Email in 2016. Then, there was a slight declined to 19% of the percentage of Email while Social network experiened a moderate rose to 56% in the end of the period.

In 2016, the rate of reasons for using Digital camera was 15% in comparion with phone calls (10%). Phone calls recorded an increased slightly by 3% of reason for using phones in 2017, and fell to 11% in 2018. However, the percentage of using Digital camera increased moderately to 20%, which is four time as many as the figure of phonecalls.


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