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The line graph presented for consideration compares income of three different bakeries in London every year over the period 2000 to 2010.

Overall, the most pronounced observation is that annual earnings of Bernie’s Buns and Robbie’s Bakery increased substantially through the period, while the figures of Lovely Loaves went down from 2000 to 2010.

In 2000, the sector is clearly dominated by Lovely Loaves with roughly 80000 euros, followed by Robbie’s Bakery and Bernie’s Buns with nearly 60000 and 20000 euros. While the revenues of Robbie’s Bakery plateaued in the next five years, Bernie’s Buns ‘s proceeds proliferates to approximately 40000 euros in 2005. Regarding Lovely Loaves, its income plummeted to 60000 in 2005.

After 2005, Robbie’s Bakery’s profits exceeded that of Lovely Loaves in 2006 and continued to reach its peak in the end of the period, with virtually 100000 euros. Following that, Lovely Loaves ‘s earnings witnessed significant fluctuation in the next few years and eventually approached its lowest point in 2010. Last, in 2010, Bernie’s Buns’ receipts was threefold its figure in 2000.

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The line graph presented for consideration compares the income of three different bakeries in London every year over the period 2000 to 2010. (Incomplete - What are the three bakeries?)

Overall, the most pronounced observation is that annual earnings of Bernie’s Buns and Robbie’s Bakery increased substantially through the period, while the figures that of Lovely Loaves went down from 2000 to 2010.

In 2000, the sector("The sector" is not good. That means all the bakeries. There are only three on this graph. You have no idea about the other bakeries. You need to revise this sentence.) is clearly dominated by Lovely Loaves with roughly 80000 euros, followed by Robbie’s Bakery and Bernie’s Buns with nearly 60000 and exactly 20000 euros. While the revenues of Robbie’s Bakery plateaued over in the next five years, Bernie’s Bunss proceeds proliferates (wrong word. ) nearly doubled to approximately 40000 euros in 2005. Regarding Lovely Loaves, its income plummeted decreased by 25% to 60000 in 2005.

After 2005, Robbie’s Bakery’s profits exceeded that of Lovely Loaves in 2006 and continued to reach its peak (wrong word - there is only one peak on the graph - That is for Lovely Loaves in 2001. ) in at the end of the period, with virtually (wrong word) 100000 euros. Following that, Lovely Loaves ‘s earnings witnessed (wrong word) had a significant decline over fluctuation (wrong word) in the next few years and eventually approached its lowest point in 2010. Last, in 2010, Bernie’s Buns’ receipts was (wrong form) three fold its figure times as what it was in 2000.

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