I really need someone to check my essay. This is the first time I have write a process diagram, so I don't have much ideas. I didn't even write enough 150 words. Thank you so much.


The diagram represents the steps for making coffee beans. There are nine steps in the process from harvest to the production of coffee beans which will be outlined below.

First, the ripe coffee beans are harvested. Then, they are put into a depulter to seperate the skin from the beans. After that, the beans are farmented from 1 to 3 days. Next, farmer takes these beans and dries them outside. When the coffee beans are dry, they are sorted. The sixth step is roasting the beans with a coffee roaster. Before they are distributed to the grocery stores, a grinder used to rub the coffee beans untill it becomes a powder. Finally, people used a coffee making machine to consume.
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I really need someone to check my essay. This is the first time I have write written an essay about a process diagram, so I don't have much many ideas. I didn't even write enough 150 words. The minimum is 150. Thank you so much.

The diagram represents the steps involved in the process of for making coffee from coffee beans. There are nine steps in the entire process, from harvesting to the production of the final coffee product, beans which will be outlined below.

First, the ripe coffee beans are harvested by hand carefully from the coffee plants. Then, they are put into a depupler, which is basically a large container on top of mechanical device, to separate the skin from the beans. After that, the beans are fermented from 1 for one to three days in special open tanks. Next, farmer takes these beans taken and dries spread them on a flat surface to dry them. outside. When the coffee beans are dry, they are sorted by hand. The sixth step is roasting the beans with a coffee roaster. Before they are distributed to the grocery stores, a grinder is used to rub mill the coffee beans untill it becomes a into a powder. That is subsequently packed and transported to the shops and supermarkets, where consumers can buy it. Finally, people used a coffee making machine to consume.