The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015 and 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

MY REPORT

The bar chart shows us about the amount of earned money of the Someland's exports in three main caterogies: Meat products, Dairy products and International tourism. Each of them is reported in three different years: the year 2005, 2015 and 2025.


Overall, the money that gets from the meat products after each period of 10 years. In opposite, the international tourism increased gradually. About the dairy products, at first it increased sharply in 2015 but in the next ten years it will decrease slightly.


In the year 2005, the meat products was at the highest position of three years with about 4 USD billions. But it increased by 0.5 USD billions in 2015 and will decline to 3 USD billions in 2025. About the international tourism, although it happens in the predictable way just like the meat products but it increases gradually. In the first year, it was approximately 6.2 USD billions and increased gently to 6.9 USD billions in 2015. In the next ten years, it will continuously rise up and reach about 7.9 USD billions in 2025.


Next, about the dairy products, the difference between two different years (2005 and 2015) was quite big (approximately 3 USD billions ). However, it declined modestly to about 7.4 USD billions in the last year of the period.


I hope that i have improved. Thank you for checking it for me. And can i ask how many points do i get?

The bar chart shows us about the amount of earned money(the value of Someland's exports ) of the Someland's exports in three main caterogies: Meat products, Dairy products and International tourism. Each of these them is reported(2025 is not in the past. There is no report from 2025 yet.) in three different years: the year 2005, 2015 and 2025.


Overall, the money that gets from (Money does not get anything from meat. This is incorrect usage.) the meat products after each period of 10 years.(This is one long noun phrase; it is not a sentence because there is no main verb.) In opposite, (wrong usage) the international tourism increased(2025 is not in the past. You can't use the past tense for a future event.) gradually. About the dairy products, at first it increased sharply in 2015(Incorrect. The increase dis not occur in one year. ... the value of dairy products increased by 60% between 2005 and 2015 from 5 to 8 billion dollars...) but in the next ten years it will decrease slightly.


In the year 2005, the meat products was at the highest position of three years with about 4 USD billions. But it increased by 0.5 USD billions in 2015 and will decline to 3 USD billions in 2025. About the international tourism, although it happens in the predictable way just like the meat products but it increases gradually. In the first year, it was approximately 6.2 USD billions and increased gently to 6.9 USD billions in 2015. In the next ten years, it will continuously(How do you know this? Do you know what will happen in 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019 and each of the years following?) rise up and reach about 7.9 USD billions in 2025.


Next, about the dairy products, the difference between two different years (2005 and 2015) was quite big (approximately 3 USD billions ). However, it declined modestly to about 7.4 USD billions in the last year of the period.


All you are doing is reading the numbers and writing them down for each separate category. You have not compared anything among the categories.

You missed some of the main features.
You do not mention that the numbers in 2025 are forecast or predicted.

The monetary units are billions of US dollars. You should tell the reader the units of measure in the first paragraph, so you don't have to keep repeating "xx billions USD" throughout the essay.

Main features:

The order of the main export categories in 2005 was first, tourism, second dairy products and third, meat products.

The total value of all three exports was 15 billion dollars.

In 2015, the order had changed: Dairy products was highest, tourism next, and meat products third, with a total value of between 18 and 19 billion.

The value of exports is predicted to be about the same in 2025 as it was in 2015, with the order of the categories being the same as it was in 2005.

THONGNGUYENI hope that i have improved. Thank you for checking it for me. And can i ask how many points do i get?

"i" is the 9th letter of the English alphabet. How can a letter improve? Does a letter get points?


The IELTS grader gives test-takers a band score, not points.

I am not an official grader, so I can only guess what your band score might be.