Hello, can you help me to correct the errors on my essay? Thanks

-------



The pie charts detail the amount of enery capacity from four different sources in the year 2015, with the forecast in 2040. These energies are fossil fuels, wind, nuclear, solar and other renewables, which is measured in gigawatts (GW).


Overall, fossil fuels made up the most proportion of energy capacity in the given period, while the lowest amount of energy capacity was represented by solar. The amount of fossil fuel usage is forecast to decrease, whereas it is the opposite for solar. Furthermore, the total capacity of worldwide energy is expected to rise significantly.


In 2015, just over one third of energy capacity was dominated by fossil fuels, followed by other renewables at the second place, which accounted for almost a quarter. However, renewable energies such as wind, nuclear and solar only accounted for approximately 10% of energy capacity.


Regarding the prediction, the total energy capacity in 2015 was 6.688 GW, but is predicted to almost doubled by the year 2040. Energy sourced by solar and wind is expected to grow considerably to 18% and 12% respectively. Contrary to that, fossil fuels is forecast to decline to 44%, and the remaining energy sources will remain constant for 25 years.

Site Hint: Check out our list of pronunciation videos.

The pie charts detail the amount of [ 1] energy capacity from four different sources: [ 2] fossil fuels, wind, nuclear, solar and other renewables, in the year 2015, with the as well as a forecast in out to 2040. These [ 3] energies are fossil fuels, wind, nuclear, solar and other renewables, which is measured in gigawatts (GW).

Overall, fossil fuels made up the most proportion of energy capacity [ 4] dominate in the given period, both years, while the lowest amount of energy capacity was [ 5] is represented by solar. The amount of Fossil fuel usage capacity is forecast to decrease, whereas it is the opposite is the case for solar. Furthermore, the total capacity of worldwide energy is expected to rise significantly.

In 2015, just over one third of energy capacity was dominated by from fossil fuels, followed by other renewables at the in second place at , which accounted for almost a quarter. However, renewables energies such as wind, nuclear and solar together only accounted for approximately 10% of energy capacity.

Regarding the prediction, the Total energy capacity in 2015 was 6.688 GW, but it is predicted to almost double and reach 11.678 GW d by the year 2040. Energy sourced by Solar and wind is are expected to grow considerably to 18% and 12% respectively. Contrary to that, fossil fuels is forecast to decline to 44%, and the remaining energy sources will remain constant for over those 25 years.

------------------------------------------------------

[ 1]: Careless spelling mistakes can cost you valuable marks! ALWAYS go over your work before submitting it.

[ 2]: list the types/categories right after you mention them.

[ 3]: “energy” is not countable in this context.

[ 4]: This is a summary task. Try to keep your sentences as concise as possible.

[ 5]: We are talking about a time in the past and a time in the future. We can overcome this problem by using the present simple, which can be used to give an account of something.