A minority of people is more well paid and has a higher income than the others. While some people think that nations could reap benefits from those people, others hold the opposite opinion and argue that governments should impose a limit on how much people can earn. In my point of view, I espouse the former since it seems to have the edge over the latter.

To commence with, limiting the salaries individuals can receive would prevent having a significant gap between the poor and the rich. When people getting more money, they tend to spend more on purchasing things to meet satisfy their needs. The more money people use in buying things, the higher living standard could be. This is because traders are likely to increase the prices of products when their customers are richer than normal people. As a result, poor people could not afford the living expenses and gather together, creating slums outside the glamorous cities. Therefore, if we have a limit on how much people can get would create a balance between the rich and the much less wealthy.

Secondly, merits flowed from those who have a higher salary than the others could help the nations improve the social well-being of their people. Since people make more money, they would pay more taxes. Those huge amounts of taxes would be injected into constructing more schools and hospitals, as well as improving the quality of those essential places. What is more, the rich can donate their money to the local charities to those who need helps. For instance, they can provide food or clothes to the poor ethnic minorities who have difficulty in getting access to the lowlands.

In conclusion, although some believe that people should not be allowed to earn more money than others, I think that rich people who earn more than others would benefit the country.

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A minority of people is (subject/verb mismatch) more well paid and has a higher income than the others. While some people think that nations could reap benefits from those people, others hold the opposite opinion and argue that governments should impose a limit on how much people can earn. In my point of view, (repetitious) I espouse the former since it seems to be better for the nation to have some very high-earning citizens. have the edge over the latter.

To commence with, (This is unnatural. No native speaker would write it.) limiting the salaries individuals can receive would prevent having a significant gap between the poor and the rich. When people getting (ungrammatical verb form) more money, they tend to spend more on purchasing things to meet satisfy (you cannot put two verbs together like this.) their needs. The more money people use in buying things, the higher their living standard could be. This is because traders (wrong word.) are likely to increase the prices of products when their customers are richer than normal people. As a result, poor people could not afford them living expenses and gather together, creating slums outside the glamorous cities. Therefore, if we have a limit on how much people can get, it would create a balance between the rich and the much less wealthy.

Secondly, merits flowed (That is incorrect word usage. "Merits" has very restricted usage. Your context is unnatural. The verb form is wrong also..) from those who have a higher salary than the others could help the nations improve the social well-being of their people. Since people make more money, they would pay more taxes. Those huge amounts of taxes would be injected into constructing more schools and hospitals, as well as improving their quality of those essential places. What is more, the rich can donate their money to the local charities to those who need helps. (wrong form. Help is non-count.) For instance, they can provide food or clothes to the poor ethnic minorities who have difficulty in getting access to the lowlands.

(That does not make any sense. Why can't they move to low-lying areas of the country?)

In conclusion, although some believe that people should not be allowed to earn more money than others, I think that rich people who earn more than others would benefit the country.

In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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