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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?
It is apparent that English has become widely spoken by many people as a result of tourist development. As a matter of fact, some people believe that English will soon become an universal language. Having one global language definitely has some benefits. However, there are also drawbacks that need to be considered as well.
Having one language globally brings some plus points. As many people nowadays like travelling to other countries, it is crucial for both visitors and native inhabitants to learn English. Communication and understanding will be much easier and it will allow them to share about their cultures effectively, therefore make the world become closer and more connected. On the one hand, knowing English is a must when you aspire to study or work overseas. That said, having a good command of English will definitely open the gate to many prestigious university for students and international companies for adult. Furthermore, when you learn a language it will remarkably develop your brain, widen your knowledge and enhance your intelligence.
Meanwhile, there are some obvious minus points of having only one global language. Firstly, not everyone are good at learning language, or if so, some of them will prefer other languages instead of English. Therefore, it will be difficult and frustrating for them to learn as they find English unnecessary. Another important thing is that when English become universal more innovation will be put on English in order to create education for people. This will lead to the oblivion of other languages and affects the diversity of cultures.
All things considered, having English as a global language has both good and bad points. That being said, we should give people a freedom of choice when it comes to learning language and most importantly, preserve local languages and cultures.
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It is apparent that English has become widely spoken by many people as a result of several factors including the rise in international tourism. tourist development. As a matter of fact, some people believe that English will soon become [ 1] an the universal language. Having one global language definitely has some benefits. However, there are also drawbacks that need to be considered as well.
Having one language globally A single global language brings some advantages. [ 2] plus points. As many people nowadays like travel ling to other countries, it is crucial for both visitors and native inhabitants locals to learn English. Communication and understanding will be much easier and it will allow them communicate effectively. to share about their cultures effectively, therefore make the world become closer and more connected. [ 3] On the one hand, knowing English is a must when you aspire This especially applies to those who want to study or work overseas. That said, And since English is the current dominant language, having a good command of English it will definitely open the gate to many prestigious universities for students, and international commercial opportunities companies for business professionals. Adult. [ 4] Furthermore, when you learn a language it will remarkably develop your brain, widen your knowledge and enhance your intelligence.
Meanwhile, Nevertheless, there are also some obvious minus points of disadvantages to having only one global language. Firstly, not everyone are good at learning language, or if so, some of them will prefer other languages instead of English. Therefore, it will be difficult and frustrating for them to learn as they find English unnecessary. [ 5]
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[ 1]: We use “an” when a noun starts with a vowel sound. For example:
an egg, an illustration, an hour …
but
a unit, a universal language (because the “u” sound is like a “y” … yoonit, yooniversal)
[ 2]: That is not formal.
[ 3]: You do not use “on the one hand” in the middle of the paragraph, without having an “on the other hand” also.
[ 4]: That is off topic. The question is about having one (not more than one) language.
[ 5]: Again, that is not a relevant point. The point about culture is good, but you need to organize and develop it. Try to think of other useful points (search on the internet if necessary).
Revise your essay and repost it below.
