Tomorrow will be my test. Although my writing is still pathetic, I still hope that I could achieve at least band 6 in this module. I will try to review all of the essays you have corrected for me before.


Some people think that people who chose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different attitudes about changing their jobs. Some believe changing jobs frequently will lead to a satisfying career life while others argued that it is better to just pursue one. I strongly agree with the former view.

For some people, it is true that sticking to one career is the best way to achieve satisfaction in career life. They believe that if you have passion and dedication for your job, you will surely gain respect and admiration from your employers. As a result, your chance of getting promotion will definitely increase and your future will be promising.

On the other hand, I think that changing your jobs will be more likely to result in a gratifying career life. Apparently, working in one particular field for many years can be monotonous and it is not guaranteed that you will improve your salary and position just by working for a long period of time. Moreover, it is likely that you will find the job does not suit your ability and you cannot get along well with your co-workers. Therefore, it would be beneficial for you to search and jump into another job which is more suitable for your skill. When changing your job, not only you will find a better workplace, but also you will have opportunities to meet better people and gain useful experience from them. Consequently, you will be able to achieve the gratification you need.

To conclude, although devoting to one job can possibly give you satisfaction, I firmly believe changing your jobs will give you a better chance of finding a long-term happiness in your career life.

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