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In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that we no longer need to use products from animals such as food, clothing items or medicine. Personally, I completely agree with this idea.

There are two main reasons why it is unnecessary to use food and clothing items from killing animals. One reason is that humans can survive on a completely plant-based diet. Since research has proven that plants contain all the vitamins and nutrients that the human body needs to develop. For example, my grandfather has been a vegetarian for over 60 years and he still in good health at the age of 80. In terms of clothing, it is not necessary to sacrifice and animals' life for a jacket or a dress because artificial fur and high- quality synthesized fabric are being used to replace animals' fur or other body parts.

There are several reasons why we no longer need to use healthcare products from animal testing, as an alternative testing method now exists that can replace the need for animals. For instance, computer-based testing has been used to test the safety of new drugs or cancer treatments. Therefore, it is unnecessary to use animals for new medicine testing or treatments.

In conclusion, for the reasons, I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that products made by killing animals such as food, clothing or medicine are unnecessary because they are replaced vegetarian food, artificial clothing materials or computer simulation

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Many people argue that we no longer need to use products made from animals such as food, clothing items or medicine. Personally, I completely agree with this idea.

There are two main reasons why it is unnecessary to use food and clothing items which require animals to be killed. from killing animals. One reason is that people humans can survive on a completely plant-based diet. Since research has proven that plants contain all the vitamins and nutrients that the human body needs to develop. (fragment. This is a dependent clause, not a complete sentence.) For example, my grandfather has been a vegetarian for over 60 years and he is still in good health at the age of 80. In terms of clothing, it is not necessary to sacrifice and (wrong word) animals' (wrong form) life for a jacket or a dress because artificial fur and high- quality synthesized (wrong word) fabric are being used to replace animals' animal fur or other body parts.

(In terms of clothing, it is not necessary to sacrifice any animals to make a jacket, coat or shoes because artificial fur and high-quality synthetic leather are available and can be used to replace these animal products.)

There are several reasons why we no longer need to use healthcare products whose ingredients have been tested for safety on animals from animal testing, as an alternative testing method now exists that can replace the need for animals. For instance, computer-based testing has been used to test the safety of new drugs or cancer treatments. Therefore, it is unnecessary to use animals for this purpose. new medicine testing or treatments. (I think the topic was about medicines or dietary supplements which are made from the body parts of animals. )

In conclusion, for these reasons, I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that products made by killing animals such as food, clothing or medicine made by killing animals are unnecessary because they are replaced by vegetarian diets, food, artificial clothing materials or safety testing by computer simulation.