The diagram depicts the structure of a university’s sports center at the present, and its transformation after reconstruction.


Looking from an overall perspective, there are significant changes which provide more amenties with sport facilities toward the West and the East of the Sport Centre. At the main entrance, there will be add more changing room, and entertainment spots like shopping and café.


At the present, there are two outdoor courts on either side of the university sport building. The plan is to convert the westen outdoor courts into leisure pool larger in size than the current 25m pool at the center. To the east outdoor courts are going to replace with sport hall next to seating area, erect two adjacent dance studios at the northeast. The facilites in the main building will not undergo alterations including changing room, reception, pool, and seating. The only slight difference is that the northenmost gym above swimming pool will be double in size eastewards.


Right on the entrance, two changing rooms will be constructed on the end of two side of the south of building and the adjoining sports shop to the west. Across from sports shop, there will be a café for relaxing.

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The diagram depicts the structure of a university’s sports center at the present, and its transformation after a planned future reconstruction.

Looking from an Overall, perspective, there are significant changes planned, including adding which provide more amenities with sport facilities toward the west and the east of the sports centre.

[ 1] At In the corners, either side of the main entrance, there will be [ 2] add [ 3]more two additional changing rooms. Closer to the entrance, there will be a and entertainment spots like shop ping to the left and a café to the right. At the present, there are two outdoor courts on either side of the university sports building. The plan is to convert the western outdoor courts into a leisure pool larger in size than the current 25m pool at the center. To the Meanwhile, the eastern outdoor courts are going to [ 4] be replaced with a sports hall next to the existing seating area. [ 5] erect Furthermore, two adjacent dance studios will be built at along the eastern wall inside the sports building. northeast. The other facilities in the main building will not undergo alterations, including the existing changing room, reception, pool, and seating area. The only slight difference is that [ 6] the northenmost gym above north of the swimming pool will be double in size extended eastwards and double in size.

[ 7] Right on the entrance, two changing rooms will be constructed on the end of two side of the south of building and the adjoining sports shop to the west. Across from sports shop, there will be a café for relaxing.

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[ 1]: That information belongs in the main body, not in the summary sentence.

[ 2]: You had two verbs “be” and “add”; you only need one. Otherwise, you can use the passive “will be added”.

[ 3]: “more” is not wrong, but instead of overusing it, you can say “additional”.

[ 4]: The passive voice is needed there. The sports hall will replace the outdoor courts.

[ 5]: You had a major grammar error there (no subject). It’s always better not to overcomplicate your sentences.

[ 6]: “the northermost gym” implies there are other gyms.

[ 7]: See point #1.

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Could you check again the word is "northernmost"?

I have checked on Cambridge Dict. and it explained the meaning is that "furthest towards the north of an area "

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Huệ LêCould you check again the word is "northernmost"?

Northernmost is an adjective. It is the superlative form. It means "located more north that all the others." Here are some examples.

Reykjavík is the capital and largest city of Iceland, the world’s northernmost capital of a sovereign state, and is a popular tourist destination.

For years I’ve wanted to visit Longyearbyen, which is the northernmost city in the world (there are some civilizations further north, but this is the northernmost city with at least 1,000 people).

The northernmost end of a road in the United States is at Prudhoe Bay in the state of Alaska (70°19') Dalton Highway.

John o'Groats, village—near Dunnet Head, the northernmost point of mainland Great Britain.

In your examples, the word "northernmost" means an place located furthest towards the north, and if I say " the northernmost gym", it will mean that the other gym.

If I say the northernmost gym of the sports building, whether it will be understood the gym being in the picture?

Huệ Lê: when you use this pattern "the + superlative + noun", you are implying more than one instance of the noun exist.

For example,

The youngest girl in the class is Susan. [ more than one girl]

The heaviest book on the shelf weighs 3 kg. [ more than one book]

The tallest man here is Victor. [ more than one man]

The northernmost gym .... [ more than one gym]

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