Some people think the newly built house should be as the same as the old house style in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own styles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.


It can be argued that buiding new houses should share commonalities in style with the old buidings, while others suggest that people have the freedom to style their own houses in the way they like. Although both views possess a degree of validity, I still endorse the fact that it is free for people to make a decision to construct houses in their own styles.

On the one hand, it may be thought that encouraging the local people to construct their houses similar to the old house style could boost the tourism in their region. To be specific, the buildings having local area's aethetical concept are more likely to attract the large number of visitors because of its culture values. For example, Hoi An which is the most prevalent acient city in Vietnam has millions of tourists visiting a year because many individuals in that city have an awareness of maintaining the old buiding style of their houses. As the result, remaining the traditional characteristics of the constructions may not only promote the economy of that area but also preserve the values of culture.

On the other hand, most of people think that the authorities should permit the local citizen to determine the concept of the houses that suits their tastes. Specifically, being forced to live in the old style buidings could make them uncomfortable and confict the current need of modern people. For instance, families of four would favour the houses are small, modern and convenient over those are large and uncomfortable. Consequently, many individuals should be free to choose their houses' style.

To conclude, it seems to me that to serve the demands of people nowadays, they should be allowed to determine the style of their house.

winxangelSome people think the newly built house should be as the same as the old house style in local areas.

That is not good English.

Here is a natural version.

Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the older houses in the neighborhood. Others think that people should have the freedom to build houses in whatever style they like. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You have a lot of spelling errors and misuse of vocabulary words.

The argument about tourism is weak.

There are very few residential neighborhoods that are tourist attractions. Most residents like peaceful and quiet neighborhoods, not ones that are crowded with loud and obnoxious visitors. A place with lots of tourists attract criminals - especially pickpockets and purse-snatchers!


It can be argued that buiding new houses should share commonalities (That does not make sense. You need to compare the houses, not the process of building.) in style with the old buidings, while others suggest that people have the freedom to style their own houses in the way they like. Although both views have merit, possess a degree of validity, I still endorse the fact (You are writing about opinions, not facts.) that it is free for people to make a decision (That is not natural.) the view that people should be able to choose the design of their house. to construct houses in their own styles.

On the one hand, it may be thought that encouraging the local people to construct their houses similar to the old house style could boost the tourism in their region. To be specific, the buildings having local area's aethetical concept (Not good phrasing) are more likely to attract the large number of visitors because of its culture values. For example, Hoi An which is the most prevalent acient city in Vietnam has millions of tourists visiting a year because many individuals in that city have an awareness of maintaining the old buiding style of their houses. As the result, remaining (wrong word) the traditional characteristics of the constructions may not only promote the economy of that area but also preserve the values of the local culture.

On the other hand, most of people think that the authorities should permit the local citizen to determine the concept of the houses that suits their tastes. Specifically, being forced to live in the old-style buidings could make them uncomfortable and confict the current need of modern people. For instance, families of four would favour the houses are small, (ungrammatical) modern and convenient over those are large and uncomfortable. (ungrammatical) Consequently, many individuals should be free to choose their houses' style.

To conclude, it seems to me that to serve the demands of people nowadays, they should be allowed to determine the style of their house.

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It can be argued that new houses should share commonalities in style with the old ones, while others suggest that people have the freedom to style their own house in the way they like. Although both views have merit, I still endorse the view that people should be able to choose the design of their house.

On the one hand, it may be thought that encouranging local people to construct their houses similar to old house style could preserve the cultural values of their region. To be specific, some areas in the world possess a distinctive cultural significance in the form of architechture. It leads to the fact that if the style of houses in that location was changed, their cultural values will be altered. Consequently, the evidence supports the claim that local people's houses should follow the design of old house.

One the other hand, most of people think that the authorities should permit the local citizen to determine the concept of the houses that suits their tastes. Specifically, being forced to live in the old style buildings could not be suitable to the current need of modern people. For instance, families of four would favour modern houses over old-fashioned ones. As a result, many individuals should be free to choose their houses' style.

To conclude, although preserving old style of houses is of paramount importance in some regions, it seems to me that to serve the demands of people nowadays, they should be allowed to determine the design of their house.