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The rapid development of information technology has resulted in a wide range of changes in humans’ lives. Lots of people quickly accept these and apply them to their daily routines, as well as their work, while others refuse to do so and continue doing things the same old ways. As a result, a variety of problematic circumstances arise that they are unable to predict.

First and foremost, if people reject to move with the high speed of change in life, they will be put behind others’ backs. Consequently, they cannot catch up with the rapid evolution of humanity’s society and be less productive at work. What is more, opposing changes restricts their access to new, potentially beneficial opportunities they are given. For instance, editors, journalists, youtubers are the people who must continually be aware of current trends in order to adapt them to their work products and provide unique contents to audiences. Furthermore, the impacts on people’s activation should be carefully considered as one of the problems. Others who consistently deny new information will not be as active as those who are likely to change more in both daily lives and careers.

Giving these people various opportunities to change, from little to large, is one of the most commonly discussed solutions, which helps them progressively adapt to the new surroundings and the changes being occurring in their lives. Moreover, those around them should inform them of how beneficial the changes are and that accepting new things is not difficult at all. Sometimes, we must make breakthroughs in order to unlock the doors that may contain much greatness inside.

To conclude, changes lead to many new and different colors in our life paintings. It makes no difference whether changes are positive or negative, people’s lives will so unfantastic if they do not take any unique steps to change. It is worthwhile to make changes in order to make our life more colorful.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?


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I cannot understand this essay. It is mostly off-topic, and uses incomprehensible phrases and examples. You did not understand this task. It is not about technology. It is about the human characteristic not to make significant changes, such as quitting a boring job, deciding to start a new business, moving to a different city, or having a baby.


The rapid development of information technology has resulted in a wide range of changes in humans’ lives. (That is completely off-topic. ) Lots of people quickly accept these and apply them to their daily routines, as well as their work, while others refuse to do so and continue doing things the same old ways. As a result, a variety of problematic circumstances arise that they are unable to predict.

First and foremost, if people reject to move with the high speed of change in life, they will be put behind others’ backs. (That does not make sense) Consequently, they cannot catch up with the rapid evolution of humanity’s society (That does not make sense) and be less productive at work. What is more, opposing changes restricts their access to new, potentially beneficial opportunities they are given. For instance, editors, journalists, youtubers (Ungrammatical, missing conjunction) are the people who must continually be aware of current trends in order to adapt them to their work products and provide unique contents to audiences. (Off-topic. The topic is not about journalists' regular jobs.) Furthermore, the impacts on people’s activation (That does not make sense. I do not know what you mean.) should be carefully considered as one of the problems. Others who consistently deny new information (Off topic.) will not be as active as those who are likely to change more in both daily lives and careers.

Giving these people various opportunities to change, from little to large, is one of the most commonly discussed solutions, (That does not make sense) which helps them progressively adapt to the new surroundings and the changes being occurring in their lives. Moreover, those around them should inform them of how beneficial the changes are and that accepting new things is not difficult at all. Sometimes, we must make breakthroughs in order to unlock the doors that may contain much greatness inside.

To conclude, changes lead to many new and different colors in our life paintings. It makes no difference whether changes are positive or negative, people’s lives will so unfantastic if they do not take any unique steps to change. It is worthwhile to make changes in order to make our life more colorful.