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The number of people shopping online is increasing dramatically. What are the benefits of shopping online? Are there any disadvantages? An increasing trend for many people around the world is e-commerce. While a common opinion is that believe in the advantage of online shopping other people feel that not trustable shopping area. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.

From an overall perspective, there are a number of advantages of online shopping. A good illustration of this that provides a width range shopping area with the best price. Perhaps the main advantage of e-commerce is having a chance to take a look product with comments of people who have bought earlier. Regrettably, people who shop in the normal store can’t have the same opportunity to have information user experience and price comparison.

Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages to online shopping. One of the most obvious of these is fake sellers and untrustworthy websites. For example, if you buy a product by an untrustworthy website then they may send a cucumber or nothing just an empty box, while these websites pretended a normal shopping website and generally have a lower price than another online platform that makes people buy from these kinds of websites.

In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online are clear numerous and varied. I am of the opinion that you can council with people who did shopping before the trustable websites that will lead to people have a great shopping experience. We have already high security and certificated websites that would help reduce the concern of individuals about fake sellers and untrustworthy websites.

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Murtaza BilirThe number of people shopping online is increasing dramatically. What are the benefits of shopping online? Are there any disadvantages? An increasing trend for many people around the world is e-commerce. While a common opinion is that believe in the advantage of online shopping other people feel that not trustable shopping area. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.

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The number of people shopping online is increasing dramatically. What are the benefits of shopping online? Are there any disadvantages?


An increasing trend for many people around the world is e-commerce. While a common opinion is that believe in the advantage of online shopping other people feel that not trustable shopping area. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.

From an overall perspective, there are a number of advantages of online shopping. A good illustration of this that provides a width range shopping area with the best price. Perhaps the main advantage of e-commerce is having a chance to take a look product with comments of people who have bought earlier. Regrettably, people who shop in the normal store can’t have the same opportunity to have information user experience and price comparison.

Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages to online shopping. One of the most obvious of these is fake sellers and untrustworthy websites. For example, if you buy a product by an untrustworthy website then they may send a cucumber or nothing just an empty box, while these websites pretended a normal shopping website and generally have a lower price than another online platform that makes people buy from these kinds of websites.

In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online are clear numerous and varied. I am of the opinion that you can council with people who did shopping before the trustable websites that will lead to people have a great shopping experience. We have already high security and certificated websites that would help reduce the concern of individuals about fake sellers and untrustworthy websites.

Much of your writing is ungrammatical.

An increasing trend for many people around the world is e-commerce. (E-commerce refers to business-to-business transactions, "on-line shopping" refers to consumer transactions. They are different subjects.) While a common opinion is that believe in the advantage (Ungrammatical) of online shopping other people feel that not trustable shopping area. (Ungrammatical) In this essay, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.

(Write a thesis statement. Put your opinion in the first paragraph. There is no "issue.")


From an overall perspective, there are a number of advantages of online shopping. A good illustration of this that provides a width range shopping area with the best price. (Ungrammatical) Perhaps the main advantage of e-commerce is having a chance to take a look product (Ungrammatical) with comments of people who have bought earlier. Regrettably, people who shop in the normal store can’t have the same opportunity to have information user experience (Ungrammatical) and price comparison.

Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages to online shopping. One of the most obvious of these is fake sellers and untrustworthy websites. For example, if you buy a product by an untrustworthy website then they may send a cucumber or nothing just an empty box, while these websites pretended a normal shopping website (Ungrammatical) and generally have a lower price than another online platform that makes people buy from these kinds of websites.

In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online are clear numerous and varied. I am of the opinion that you can council with people who did shopping before the trustable websites that will lead to people have a great shopping experience. We have already high security and certificated websites that would help reduce the concern of individuals about fake sellers and untrustworthy websites. (Do not add additional argument points in the conclusion paragraph.)

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