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Prompt: Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?



Essay


Technology substantially impacts humans’ lifestyles. Some believe lives are producing complications as it is advancing and should be simplified by turning away technical enhancement. In my opinion, I unequivocally oppose that viewpoint due to the convenience and connection of its advantage.


To commence, technology does not complicate our life at all. Besides, I unquestionably believe technology perpetually clarifies the way we live. Though It may be hard to get used to modern devices, we can do everything in a simpler manner which is reduced movements. To illustrate this, television gives a more interesting opportunity to people to get news rather than reading the newspaper. Online shopping sites enable them to buy goods they want without going shopping as well. Additionally, jobs become lighter as we have the support of machines. Manufacturing does not need a huge labor resource for example. Briefly, the more technology enhances, the more straightforward we live.


Furthermore, technology unites people worldwide. Thanks to social platforms, we can associate with others without physical traveling. Namely, networking sites such as Facebook, WhatsApp permit us to meet up with our friends, family even they’re on the other continent. Media give humans information globally in addition. Technology does not only connect people together but also with the world intellectually. Technology helps us accomplish the truths in terms of achieving new knowledge. We know more about the ocean due to the invention of submarines and the cosmos because of the astronomy development. In toto, technology is the indispensable bridge that links people with reality.


To conclude, technology simplify our lives more than we thought. It is not feasible to shut yourself off from technology without being isolated from the world which is a massive sacrifice, though. In my perspective, I would conflict with no hesitation with that view due to its outstanding benefits of being convenient and connective.

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Modern computing and communications technology (Do not use "technology" without specifying what kind of technology you are talking about.) substantially impacts humans (Do not use "human" to as a substitute for "people." Human is used in comparison with animals or robots. ) our lifestyles. Some believe lives are it is producing complications as it is advancing and our lives should be simplified by returning to a simpler age. turning away technical enhancement. In my opinion, I unequivocally oppose that viewpoint due to the convenience and connection of its advantages that these new developments bring.


To commence, the latest technology does not complicate our life at all. Besides, I unquestionably believe it technology perpetually clarifies (wrong word) simplifies the way we live. Though It may be hard to get used to modern devices, we can do everything in a simpler manner which is reduced movements. (wrong phrase) To illustrate this, television gives a more interesting opportunity to people to get news rather than reading the newspaper. Online shopping sites enable them to buy goods they want without going to stores and malls shopping as well. Additionally, jobs become lighter as we have the support of machines. Manufacturing does not need a huge (Huge and big are words for baby stories. They are not good for academic writing.) large labor resource for example. Briefly, the more technology develops enhances, (wrong word) the more straightforward we live.

Furthermore, technology unites people worldwide. Thanks to social platforms, we can associate with others without physical traveling. Namely, networking sites such as Facebook, WhatsApp permit us to meet up with our friends, family (ungrammatical. Missing conjunction ) even they’re (Do not use contractions in acedemic writing.) on the other (wrong phrase. There are more than two continents.) continent. The news media give us humans (Do not use "human" to as a substitute for "people." Human is used in comparison with animals or robots. ) information globally in addition. Technology does not only connect people together but also with the world intellectually. That makes no sense.) Technology helps us accomplish the truths (wrong phrase. We accomplish goals and tasks. We do not accomplish the truth.) in terms of achieving new knowledge. We know more about the ocean due to the invention of submarines and the cosmos because of the astronomical telescopes and spacecraft. y development. In toto, technology is the indispensable bridge that links people with reality.


To conclude, technology simplify (wrong verb form) our lives more than we thought. It is not feasible to shut yourself off from technology without being isolated from the world which is a massive sacrifice, though. In my perspective, I would conflict with no hesitation with that view due to its outstanding benefits of being convenient and connective.


You need to be careful of the word "technology." It needs qualification. Hominins have been developing new technologies for millions of years. Ages are named for the technologies of the time - the Stone Age, the Bronze Age and the Iron Age tell us what people were using to invent new tools and objects.

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