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Subject: Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.

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There is a belief is that we human beings now have too many choices in our life. The "choices" can be comprehended as the things available to us in our daily life like food, drink, necessities of all kinds and brands to more important things like occupation and living place. While to a certain degree that is correct but as a whole, I disagree with such thinking.

For the majority of those who live in developed countries or wealthy enough in less developed ones, it is true that there are many choices for us due to the advancement in society, technology, healthcare and the appearance of globalization. Just less than 500 years ago, most of the food we ate were seasonally and locally produced only, while anything foreign and had to be transported from far away were incredibly expensive. But now foreign products, some sent from half a world away, are not only easy to find but also relatively cheap. Same thing applies for other goods and merchandise.

But such belief is far from being fact on a macroscopic scale. Right now, more than a billion people are suffering from extreme poverty and starvation. The things they eat, the work they do are not only cruelly limited but also of terrible quality and condition. "Choices" are a luxury for them. And we are only talking about the far extremity here and not accounting for those who although live in slightly better condition but the mentioned belief doesn't apply to them. How can we say that "nowadays we have too many choices" when one out of seven people have barely any choice in their life? This is the main problem with such thoughts and beliefs: They are mainly gut feelings or take no consideration of the majority.

In conclusion, while it is true that for those who are more privileged, more choices are available for them than ever before, but looking at the whole picture, things have not changed much.

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There is a belief is that we human beings now have too many choices in our life. The "choices" can be comprehended as the things available to us in our daily life like food, drink, necessities of all kinds and different brands to more important things like our occupation and living place to live. While to a certain degree that is correct, but as a whole, I disagree with such thinking.

For the majority of those who live in developed countries or the wealthy enough in less developed ones, it is true that there are many choices for us due to the advancement in society, technology, healthcare and the appearance of globalization. Just less than 500 years ago, most of the foods we ate were seasonally and locally produced only, while anything foreign and had to be transported from far away, making it were incredibly expensive. But now foreign products, some sent from half a world away, are not only easy to find but also relatively cheap. The same thing applies for other goods and merchandise.

But such belief is far from being fact on a macroscopic scale. Right now, more than a billion people are suffering from extreme poverty and starvation. The things they eat, and the work they do are not only cruelly limited but also of terrible quality and condition. "Choices" are a luxury for them. And we are only talking about the far extremity extremes here and not accounting for those who although live in slightly better conditions but the abundance of choice still mentioned belief doesn't not apply to them. How can we say that "nowadays we have too many choices" when one out of seven people has have barely any choice in their life? This is the main problem with such thoughts and beliefs: They are mainly gut feelings or take no consideration of the majority.

In conclusion, while it is true that for those who are more privileged, more choices are available for them than ever before, but looking at the whole picture, things have not changed much.

Hi,

My name is Rhythm, can you please help me validate this essay on the same topic.

"Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?"


Certain people opine that nowadays we have so many choices related to goods, work, etc. In my opinion, with the advancement of technology the choices for various things has increased manifold. Although with the increase in comsumption, prices of the products has rise as well, this increase is not much than the salary of people nowadays as compared to the past.

Firstly, with the increase in machinery, manufacturing of goods has risen due to which a large number of commodities are produced. As a result of which, supermarkets are flooded with a huge number of products and these products rarely goes out stock. For instance, in agricultural sector, with the use of improved equipments and chemicals by the farmers, farming is now able to produce a large amount of crops with greater quality.

Secondly, as the population has increased, the demand and supply graph of commodities has also risen which resulted in the increase in competition for same products in the market. As there is a lot of competition, the quality of product has improved so that customers prefer to buy from that particluar company.To illustrate, if we want to purchase noodles from market, we will be provided with many choices of brand such as maggie, yippee noodles, wai-wai noodles and so on.

Finally, apart from choices related to products available in the market, the job opportunites has also increased. This provided people with option to switch jobs if not satisfied with the working conditions or salary. Also, people are paid with high salaries for the same job as compared to the past.

To conclude, with the rise in production of commodities and the companies manufacturing them, the choices for these products has increased. Apart from these choices, nowadays a lot of options related to work are present. However, with the high consumption of natural resources, the products that are obtained from them are declining but people have started producing alternatives for them that will result in the increase in their option as well.

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anonymousMy name is Rhythm, can you please help me validate this essay on the same topic.

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